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twilight? never seen it or read the books so i have no clue who victoria is XD ummthanks for the revews i will try the improvements

I miss her eyes. Her beautiful, golden eyes. They were a colour id never seen before. It was a warm loving colour, just like her. I remember her smile, her ...

thats a verry intresting poem, love all the ryming words, and the way it makes sence and dosent at the same time

heyy im emily. this poem was so downto earth,helping people relise whats happaning in childrens worlds. i know from expiriance that life can be verry hard and unforgiving but poems ...

what a beautiful heartful story, i love the gore and sadness in it, i love the way he done it for her. someguys dont do alot for there girls, but ...

it was amasing,and almost sad

hahah yea.. i like to jump strate to the pointwhen im wrighting,otherwise i find i get bord and never finish the story. some of my longer pices that im typing ...

thanks you guys, there shure to help, with this it was for in the morning so im shure there were a few off bits :S if youve ever read anyof ...

It was a fresh summers evening, the sun still high in the sky shone down warming the grass and the cobble path. I took my shoes off and laid them ...

amasin story,but verry slow, really i loved it,gives an insight to how some people (much like myself) feel about v-day :P

hahah it was a verry sly ending, if you dontmind me saying, the first part,ifyou carryed it on, it could have been a beautiful and sad poem full of heart, ...

beautifuly written, a unique stye

made me cry, verry uppsetting but full ov love and will power good job :) keep wrighting

its verry good, deep, but needs a longer story , make it gory maybe, or explane how they kill.

i love the emoness of this, its a beautiful poem, full of thought and putts in alott of pain, showing feeling and i love it :) id love to know ...