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that would be pretty awesome :)

There are quite a lot of grammatical errors in this song, but I think if you fixed them up it would be quite a good song.

I like the idea of the song, but I think you could make it better. I don't like the line Now you’re six feet in the ground/ because it's too ...

beautiful. i really like it. that's all i have to say.

Interesting and cute, and quite simple. I like it.

I don’t want to let you down But I don’t know if I can live up to your expectations I don’t want to bring you down But I can’t seem ...

thanks for your feedback. i don't think i am an angry person, it's just that when i am angry i write a song to make myself feel better. that's why ...

thanks for your reviews guys :) it does have tune and i guess some of it looks stupid written down, but it actually does sound good when i sing it... ...

I really like this poem, I feel the same way sometimes and I've written many a song about it but nothing quite like this. Only one thing I noticed, disappointment ...

I’m sorry I’m changing I’m sorry if you don’t know me I’m sorry I’m different But it’s the way it has to be I’m sick of being so predictable Everyone ...

I did understand that this song was about sex, so I don't think you need to worry about that except I think the line about the arrows is unclear though, ...

Firstly I would like to suggest putting this in a different format ie poem as it is quite hard to read as it is Secondly I would like to say ...

um no offence, but that seriously sounds like something a ten year old wrote. is it meant to be like that? is it meant to be funny? or are you ...

This is so gorgeous! It reads really easily and I it's relatable to most people. I think you have written a fantastic poem, well done!

The clock strikes twelve And I run for fear of exposure My heart is broken But I try to keep my composure I’m a nobody and I’m treated like dirt ...