emalily

This is so sad! Another old write. I have no name I am but a ghost Fading in and out of shadows Going with the wind Letting it carry me ...

I was gonna get what I wanted I had an impeccable plan Everything was going so perfectly Then along came this man And he’s making it hard to breathe And ...

oh haha i get it now

Thanks for you're comments :) I meant stay as in stay in bed. My rhyming usually comes easily to me and it did with this song. I guess a song ...

cute. I think you should add another verse (or whatever its called in poetry) at the start, describing the clouds before they had to burst because I think the first ...

Hey! my eyes want to cry I would just say "I want to cry" ... eyes are just the things that tears come out of, they don't have a mind ...

Wow, I really like it. I especially like the line I was so young I didn’t know that Some things do not return. and I like the way you repeat ...

First, I'm just going to correct your spelling etc in pink Other comments in blue I can't talk. I can't breath e . Unless you 're near. Near me. I ...

I like it :) The only thing that annoyed me was And every dog, it's way. because of the saying "every dog has its day" and i feel like that ...

thankyou :)

I think it's awesome haha

Go away world, don’t wake me today Leave me alone, I think I’ll just stay I won’t answer my messages I won’t pick up the phone Not like I’ll get ...

I like it. It reminds me of a song I have written. I think this poem is darker than what it seems on the surface. Did you think about what ...

I think I like it, but I'm not sure I understand it. Obviously you do though, an despite my ignorance I like the words you have used. :)

Wow you are so talented! You probably already know that but it's always nice to be told :) I really like the sky falling one