emalily

all i have to say is: hahahahahaha!!!!!!!!!!

Time makes changes I think I’m changing There’s not much you can do While you were sleeping I was dreaming And I wasn’t dreaming of you It’s time to face ...

I think I reviewed another one of your songs, and I have to say I like this one much more. It feels more original and i love the first two ...

I'm sorry to have to say this but it seems a bit cliche. Especially the refrain and the chorus. The verses are good though, I espcecially like this bit: I ...

Thanks everyone for your feedback! It feels good to know that people can relate to my lyrics. Bunty6, I joined your club, thanks for inviting me Emmzziee, thankyou, fame isn't ...

I should’ve been an actress I should’ve been a star I could do something with my life I could’ve gone far I could’ve gone places But instead I stayed ‘Because ...

Hey there! How are you going? The first thing I would do differently with this song is the lay out. It makes it hard to read as a song when ...

I agree that this would be better as lyrics than as a poem. I could wish For you to call I would put this line with the first line so ...

Thanks everyone for your feedback. I'm glad you can relate to this song, and that you have put your own interpretation of this song, because i think that's what song ...

Well I don't know much about Henry the 8th but your knowledge is clearly good. It seems more like a song than a poem in my opinion Look at what ...

thanks heaps guys!

Thirteen years Feels like a lifetime But now it’s over, What will I do? Thirteen years, Think of the memories Remember the good times I’m gonna miss you I can’t ...

I think I’m a little misunderstood I’m not sure how people perceive me But when I say I don’t think I’m the best Nobody seems to believe me Everybody seems ...

to tell you the truth this isn't one of my better works... i just felt the need to post something haha i pretty much agree with you about everything, although ...

Wow, harsh and depressing. I'm guessing you were quite angry or upset when you wrote this? Do you really feel that way? I really like the poem especially the last ...