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Re: One Year Social Experiment of a Teenager Chapt. 1
“You’re wrong,” I told my friend, Jamie, as we sat down at our table in the cafeteria. “You can’t feign love. It has to be felt.” “It’s been scientifically proven ...
Feb 19, 2011 -
Re: Hated
If you would like to listen to this song :) I thought I was right I thought I was the best I did things just to spite Cause it’s me ...
Feb 19, 2011 -
Re: The One Year Social Experiment of a Teenager (Prologue)
All I have to say is there is so books about 14 years olds! I will list them: Georgia Nicolson That other book by Louise Rennison Harry Potter and the ...
Feb 6, 2011 -
Re: When It Rains
thanks for the awesome reviews guys! if you would like to take a listen, here's the link, I posted it on youtube :/
Feb 4, 2011 -
Re: When It Rains
the chords are Am, F, C and G I tried to upload myself singing it, but I couldn't figure out how to do it haha
Jan 29, 2011 -
Re: When It Rains
Thankyou everyone :) I do have music to go with the lyrics :)
Jan 27, 2011 -
Re: Looker
I really like this, but it's so short! It says these are lyrics but I feel more like it's a poem, although I'm sure you have a tune etc for ...
Jan 27, 2011 -
Re: F The World
Oh I forgot to say the one thing I didn't like was the use of the word yak... maybe you could find a better rhyme for fact?
Jan 27, 2011 -
Re: F The World
Hey! I really like it!! I really like the chorus Come on, just remember Not everybody hates people like us I love this line! I would really like to hear ...
Jan 27, 2011 -
Re: The Teachers (a screenplay) [part 1]
Haha, this is pretty funny. ISAACISAAC BRUSHMORE Morning, Kathy. you accidentally wrote Isaac twice here. loose your job should be lose not loose. ISAAC BRUSHMORE It’s the only they understand. ...
Jan 26, 2011 -
Re: When It Rains
Thanks Tim :) and waywardbird :)
Jan 26, 2011 -
Re: When It Rains
So here is a link to a video of me singing this song. Hope you like it :) You're standing on my doorstep, trying to say you're sorry But the ...
Jan 25, 2011 -
Re: A Little Boulder (Bolder)
Interersing! Is it actually about a boulder or is it a metaphor for something else? I couldn't quite work that out haha. Courage...don't leave me. Heart...don't falter now. I'm not ...
Jan 25, 2011 -
Re: I'm So Full Of It
I like the idea of your poem, but I think in some parts the rhyming does seem a little forced. Sorry that's all I have to say!
Jan 24, 2011 -
Re: Anyone Would If Lonely
Wow i really like this! I really like the title as well. I was going to tell you which line I liked the best but I couldn't pick one. I ...
Jan 14, 2011
