emalily

thanks for the feedback!

Written by my sister and I, We don't have a name for it yet. We plan for this to be the first of a series. Please any constructive critism and/or ...

If you would like to hear this song, here's the link to me singing it :) Most people spend their lives Searching for where they belong They don’t know when ...

The capitals indicate that it is a song

Wow, what a powerful story. I could easily imagine the horror of what was going on, and it made me feel sick to my stomach, which I guess was what ...

Hey this is a musical I'm writing based on the Hans Christian Anderson story "The Swineherd" At the moment I just want to finish a rough draft and any feedback ...

Whenever there is this many posts on a work I feel it's kind of pointless to give feedback as everything has already been said, but I couldn't resist telling you ...

To hear this song :) I think you’re asking too much this time You’ve got to see that it’s not all fine I simply can’t see how this can work ...

Hey! This made me smile :) It's really well written too and there's no nonsense in there that doesn't need to be in there. Well done :)

yay it's so awesome! i didn't even read it but i know it's awesome because you wrote it!

Oh and i forgot to say you have a beautiful voice!!

Wow everything about this song is so beautiful! The lyrics, the melody and the video is great! Well done!

Ha, sorry. I originally typed this just for my own use, and I forgot to change it when I put it on here! Thanks :)

I quite like it :) I just have to say it's 'belief' not beleif.

Instead of: Solvalery wrote: What I feel is anger What I feel is pain What I feel is there's no worse feeling Than feeling betrayed I think it should be: ...