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I honestly... LOVED this!!!! I think its a great idea to do this. I wish I did this.

fictionfanatic, I see what you mean. I did kind of rushed this because it just became a thought and I didnt realize until now that this story didnt make sense. ...

The new and towering boy in outpatient folds the lavish scaffold of himself into a smallish chair as though it were an ongoing task to account for all his parts, ...

This is pretty good! There were a few mispeliings and erros. Make sure you read through your work before submitting it first. Also, give a little more details. Why were ...

Nate Caldwell founded the Young Writers Society while a student at Saint Mary's College of Maryland in November 2004. The site quickly grew to over 110 users by the end ...

I agree with UnderTheGun. It felt rushed. But I like this kind of stories, so keep writing! :D

Afrer just skimming through it, I saw that 1. you didn't break the text. and 2. the first paragrapgh should be shorten down, I mean really? Do you need to ...

I like it. keep up the good work.

I liked it. There were a few spelling and gramar errors. But you fixed it. :D

Just for the hell of it, you took out scissors and cut up the sky. Mostly clipped shapes of the svelte female hip, water jugs, Cheshire leers, grinning way the ...

I so agree! Words are more than a bunch of letters put together. They have feelings and power to create. I've been writing and keeping journals ever since I could ...

Thanks Kitty15

Welcome all new writers! Let me introduce YWS to you. Young Writers Society is an online community where young writers can share their literary works with one another. Others then ...

Thanks. I just changed my errors now.

September 5, 4:15PM: My first day of high school went really well, actually. They have a special writing system just for me. So I can read, write, and do homework ...