elle21

I enjoyed this story alot :} I had my doubts when I first started reading it, but it was funny and had a good plot. "I'm not sure you understand, ...

I'm really inlove with this poem. I wish I had some good constructive crticism to give you. But alas, I do not.

jumanji

Hey I'm just looking for something new to read and was wondering if anyone had any suggestions. I go through books very quickly and it's becoming a slight problem. I'm ...

You need to capitalize your i's. Sorry, that's my pet peeve talking. But I like it. It's simple and straight forward. Sorry this is so short.

‘Thanks! I am trying to get, do you know Jack? Jack Keogh? I do not know why but this line bugs me alot. It feels like you're just jumping. I ...

Most people practice some sort of religion or belief, and adolescents are no exception. However, many childhood experiences with religion involve sitting in a building, singing and praying. Praying fo

It was a slow night at the MGM casino in Las Vegas when arguably the two most interesting patrons of the night walked in. I think there should be a ...

I enjoy how you break down and go through what someones thought process is when they see someone at first glance. Certainly an ice-breaker but far too individualistic to You ...

fresh-cut grass and watermelon, shallow ponds where you once fell in, Haha. remember that time and that place where we talked about this? when was that? oh yeah today :P ...

Thanks! I'll try to remember that for next time.

Iliked it. It made me smile. It's simple and cute. The only thing that I didn't like was the repetitive use of starting sentences I don't know it that's and ...

I'm happy I'm not the only one who can see Mori with Haruhi :] You captured his thought process very well here, however, I do feel like you need to ...

A/N:I wrote this a very long time ago so I'm sorry if it makes little or no sense. The room is decorated in a colorless palette of black and white. ...

I enjoy the randomness of it, but does it have anything to do with your previous Sunday story, other than sharing the same character? If it does I'm really interested ...