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I'm at the beach, and a sexy waiter named Paco is serving me strawberry lemonade on a tray as I lay on a fluffy yellow beach towel on a beach ...

The snaps on my grips make satisfying clicks, Maybe today it'll be me she picks, The room is loud with bustling conversations, I read a poster on the wall that ...

i thought this was great, i couldn't stop reading it! can't wait to read more. :)

i really loved this; please hurry to post more- im anxious to read it!!! the only thing i would change is that you said "I had friends. Average friends. My ...

Chapter 1 I walk down the vacant, gray sidewalk, surveying distance between cracks. My arms goosebump, but I don't pull out the coat from my backpack. I try to make ...

"Why am I depressed?" I repeat, trying to function the meaning of this question. I stare at the melon-green walls of my therapists office, my forefinger rubbing the leather chair ...

Kitty: This, per usual, was absolutely genius, if i do say so myself. I loved the way it rhymed, but wasn't at all forced. It flowed elegantly, like icing laced ...

LastPaladin: These pictures were absolutely gorgeous. I love how you incorporated the sunlight into each one, and how they were all of nature, but have a modern effect of society ...

Dear jane: This was a very well-written, emotional poem, and I absolutely loved it. I think your perspective, language, and descriptions were extremely good in this piece. I only have ...

My eyes fly open, and I look around, my husband's back presses against mine, as I prop up on my elbow, and I know in my gut that something's wrong ...

Okay, first off- O_O Whoa. Dude. That. Was. Awesome, man. That painting was totally sick!!! It's better than something you'd see in a freaking museum! The details were amazing, and ...

Jane: Okay, this story was absolutely fantastic. Totally meaningful, thoughtful, and with a moral! I loved this, and couldn't stop reading it!!! I made no note of any spelling, grammatical, ...

My dear Kamas, you have done it again!!! I was incredibly entertained by your series of poems, and thought it was very creatives to make the many poems into one. ...

KingOlion: I thought this was very good, for the most part; here is my cousin's input (who by the way is NOT a writer ^^): -It was good in the ...

Kyousuke: This was amazing. Your descriptions were awesome, and the rhythm was flowing and free, as was your rhyming, which in most cases, tends to seem forced, and not natural. ...