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Re: Well Hello There :)
Hello and welcome to YWS, Jazz. I'm Ehte. If you have any queries or just want to talk just let me know. I hope you enjoy your stay here. Everyone ...
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Re: Just Joined
Hello and welcome to YWS, Seven. I'm Ehte. If you have any queries or just want to talk just let me know. I hope you enjoy your stay here. Everyone ...
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Re: Hello, privet!
Hello and welcome to YWS, Stars. I'm Ehte. If you have any queries or just want to talk just let me know. I hope you enjoy your stay here. Everyone ...
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Re: Rejection
There's a lump in my throat that just won't go Away Keep away in the previous line itself. Goes with the flow and the rhyme. No matter how much I ...
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Re: Listen
Hello there. I'm sorry to say but I think that this poem was a big lump of cliches. Except the Listen part. You need to lengthen it a bit and ...
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Re: Behind Closed Doors and Inside Loud Houses.
I can't hack this water straight off my back, Ruthless and shameless, no more talkin' back, Take what you say and try to act, Rutheless and shameless, no more talkin' ...
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Re: Hey
Hello and welcome to YWS, King. I'm Ehte. If you have any queries or just want to talk just let me know. I hope you enjoy your stay here. Everyone ...
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Re: Intreasting
Hello and welcome to YWS, MasterL. I'm Ehte. If you have any queries or just want to talk just let me know. I hope you enjoy your stay here. Everyone ...
May 1, 2011 -
Re: Everything Nice
I crave only melt on the tongue A bit confusing! I think you missed out some words. Sweets and high fructose corn syrup Colors ranging in pinks to blues To ...
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Re: I'll Be There
Hello there. This is a very good poem and I love it. I liked your concept and it had a good flow to it but the rhymes were forced at ...
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Re: Neurosis
It's a poem about a person who has failed in life and the others are after him. Always trying to hurt and be rude, so the act of insolence but ...
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Re: YWS Screencaps
6666.. Go Bamboozle!!
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Re: Infinite Days
Hello there, Freak. Cool concept. A pilgrimage to find love, eh? Very original and new. I have a read on this same thing. It was written by Paulo Coelho. It ...
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Re: The Realization
I'm sorry I ever hurt you, I really meant no harm, Period Just listen to what I have to say, No comma. And do not be alarmed. This line is ...
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Re: Memory of Sorrow
I tremble, When that memory, Comes knocking, At the windows of my soul. This line has a good imagery. I love it. That memory, Of my ancestors; With pain, Stuck ...
May 1, 2011