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WOW. That is the only expression which i had when i read this piece... Really very impressive... Keep up the good work... :)

Awesome.... Just if you had kept the flow correct it would have been flawless... Except just for it everything is really impressive.... Great work... Keep it up... :)

Good work but its a little bit short... Better improve it and make it a bit big... Keep up the good work... :)

Good piece of work... Great use of words... Really very impressive... Keep up the good work mate... :)

Great work... It's just AWESOME.... WOW... I'm a fan buddy... Keep it up... :)

Good work... A good rhythm... Yes you should try adding some more lines to it... It will be much more better.... Non the less great job... keep it up....

Its a good work mate and there is nothing it that we could be able to rip it to shreds.... Keep up the good work... :)

A good piece but you did not get the flow of the poem right.... It could have been better than this.... I myself write poems and i can understand how ...

By gay i meant happy....

Refresh the spirit Renew your soul Face your dread Don't fear it Find new opportunities Go near it Make them your goal And then again you will be whole Your ...

So what, I may be younger, So what, I may be new, You're meant to be accepting, Helpful, not annoyed. My heart stops- a new message, My heart stops- a ...

Great work... Just love it... Especially the lines in italics are just outstanding.... Impressive work mate... Keep up the good work.... :)

I like your name "Silent Rain"... A very thoughtful name.... And about your poem - its good.... i like the breaking of your lines to make them sound good.... great ...

really a interesting piece of work.... good going with the words.... and the flow is very good.... keep up the good work....

good work.... good narration.... i know how hard can it be to write a story which rhymes i myself write poems but im still a beginner...... keep up the work..