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Re: The Rebel Teen's Sister*EDITED*
It is good but not great... It could have been great if you would have not made lines such large and if you have not tried to rhyme all... I ...
Jan 6, 2011 -
Re: Dawn
Great work buddy... And the title of the poem is just too good... The flow is really marvelous and the small lines give a different look to the poem... It ...
Jan 6, 2011 -
Re: Of Endless Summer Days and Daffodils
Marvelous.... Its a one word that precisely describes this piece... It had the perfect flow along with some good rhythm.... And as said above you have some great vocabulary... By ...
Jan 6, 2011 -
Re: Take Me Away
Take me away, to the land of my dreams. Where its just me and you. And love is the ruler supreme. Where flowers don't wither, and the sun never goes ...
Jan 5, 2011 -
Re: Disney Doodles
These works are just awesome... I just have one word WOW... Great background given for the lion and a perfect sketch of Ariel... I need an autograph from you.... I'm ...
Jan 5, 2011 -
Re: New Style
Its just great... I love Star Wars and so i love this too and on the other hand its a great picture.... I like the little sheriff badge and the ...
Jan 5, 2011 -
Re: How Can I Forget?
It isn't such a good work mate.... As mentioned above there are a lot of repetitions and it isn't good... And you did not get the right flow... After reading ...
Jan 5, 2011 -
Re: ...and them I smiled
A good work mate... But you have arranged it in such a way that it looks like a short story... Better try using some punctuations and slice the lines and ...
Jan 5, 2011 -
Re: Whispers of Rebellion [Locked for Spamming]
A good piece.... What should i call it?? CUTE... A simple work and too short and guess if you lengthen it then it would be more attractive... And everything else ...
Jan 5, 2011 -
Re: Trapped In A Box
This is one of the sketches which are very old... It is from when i started drawing.... I'm bad with hands and fingers so please forgive me for it... I ...
Jan 5, 2011 -
Re: I Hate You
A really good piece bu its a bit short it would be better if you lengthen it... It invokes raw emotions and its the best part of it... And as ...
Jan 5, 2011 -
Re: Honey I Love You
Buddy you really got some talent and it shows in your work over here.... I too myself try to write lyrics but end up writing a simple poem... Its not ...
Jan 5, 2011 -
Re: Sauron
WOW... Great work mate... It reminded me of LotR.... The great evil sauron.... I have nothing to review because everything is already mentioned above.... Just keep up the good work ...
Jan 5, 2011 -
Re: A mind/body
A very good piece.... Wonderful work... Totally like the Euclid part... Keep up the good work mate... PM me for anything... :)
Jan 4, 2011 -
Re: Thing of darkness
Really good piece... Short, neat and everything is in a perfect flow... Its a good thing that everything sticks with the heading and nothing is off the track... Keep up ...
Jan 4, 2011