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Good one... It was good to read.... Great work with the rhyming.... Keep up the good work... :) PM me for anything... :D

It was a good piece but i could not much get what was going on there.... Can you please elaborate?? Good use of words and nice imagery.... Keep up the ...

Great one.... A story unfolded in a poem... Its very impressive how you created in on your phone.... How much time did it actually take you?? You better lengthen a ...

There is this thing in India to kill the baby girl child even before she is born that is in the womb of her mother especially in the rural areas ...

Good drawings.... In the 1st picture the pencil marks should be erased and if the beak is shifted to a slightly lower position then it would look better.... In the ...

A good story with every possible details and the beauty of each and every thing present there.... Keep writing... :) :D

Brutal and Breathtaking..... The story behind it is very touching.... I could feel the emotions felt by the father towards his son... Very well written.... Awesome.... Keep up the good ...

Good work to have been on Paint.... It could have been more better if you would have used more details like a bit of shadow and all.... All in all ...

Awww.... Its so cute.... it surely did make me laugh.... I love the use of bright and vibrant colors.... It would be better if you change that indifferent expression into ...

I don't know what type of poetry this is.. So critics people, you are welcome tear this thing(whatever it is) apart... 8) Good friends are hard to get, harder to ...

Is that guy Avenger?? *concentrates* This strip could need some details as said by LilySoulMahon could use more words and a little more details on the figures.... It could be ...

A very good piece... It invokes raw emotions and i love it how you have conveyed the whole story.... AWESOME.... I would relate to all the teen guys out there... ...

BRAVO.... You really have some talent if you wrote it at the age of ten.... I like it a lot.... I would to sing along if someone sets the right ...

Wonderful... It surely does relate to me and to every teen out there.... Great rhythm and a perfect flow.... I wish i could write like you can.... Keep writing... :) ...

RazHuni Claire is meant to be that way... If you noticed the foot then you should have also noticed her hand.... She has six fingers there as well.... She is ...