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Re: bushcraft bowie knife
Cool knifes i must say... Its really very impressive that you made this lethal thing... AWESOME.... :D
Jan 14, 2011 -
Re: Changes
It was good but could have been better... If you read it loud it seems very dull... It does not a good flow either... Keep writing and you will get ...
Jan 14, 2011 -
Re: Pluto's Light
Good showcase of your imaginations mate... Good piece i just loved it... It had good rhythm and a perfect flow... Keep writing... :) Pm me for anything... :D
Jan 14, 2011 -
Re: Wine On-Line
Well... It keeps me thinking for a while that was is this thing all about... I could not understand it... Then also it had a good flow but it went ...
Jan 14, 2011 -
Re: A remembrance of my friendship...
This is truly awesome... It touched my heart.... It invokes raw emotions... Its a very good piece with the true facts of life... Great rhyming and flow... I loved it.. ...
Jan 14, 2011 -
Re: Moscow Does Not Believe the Tears
Its a lovely piece... Like said above it invokes raw emotions... It was perfect... Flawless as much as i can see... I just loved it... Keep up the great work.. ...
Jan 14, 2011 -
Re: My past week sketches
These are some of my drawings which i did in the past week... 1. Haven't yet named her 2.Echo 3.Melone.... Because her eye color is like of melon 4.Gaz... Hope ...
Jan 13, 2011 -
Re: No answer :(
It is a good piece to read through... Great imagery.... Good flow throughout.... Keep writing... :) PM me for anything... :D
Jan 13, 2011 -
Re: Sketch of a Forgotten Marionette
BRAVO.... Its a marvelous sketch... Great shading..... I have nothing else to say... I'm speechless... By the way did you use charcoal for this??? Keep up the great work... :) ...
Jan 13, 2011 -
Re: Cold
It was a good piece but it lacked emotions.... Couldn't feel anything while i read along... It had a good flow but at some places it simply lost the flow... ...
Jan 13, 2011 -
Re: I Need Someone
Its a good piece... But it has got a lot of choruses compared to the main material.... You better work on the main a bit more... I'm really sorry for ...
Jan 13, 2011 -
Re: A Summer's Dream
It was a good piece.... Good use of vocabulary... But there was no flow in your piece... And you totally messed up the portion of vengeance.... You better redo it... ...
Jan 13, 2011 -
Re: Homemade Devil
I love myself. I don't care about you. I'm very mean. So screw you. I'm selfless. I'm wicked. You better stay away. Or else you will be baited. I'm blessed ...
Jan 12, 2011 -
Re: Kindness Can Change A Life
BRAVO... A story well conveyed through your poem... Good rhythm and a good flow.... Keep up the good work... :) PM me for anything... :D
Jan 12, 2011 -
Re: Together? No.
Now i get it... The couples would be having some drastically changing relationship statuses on Facebook... XD :D
Jan 12, 2011