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Re: A Thought
This an instant poem written while aboard the train. I was excessively bored so i wrote this piece. Lend me your mind, and I will write you a thought. A ...
Feb 13, 2011 -
Re: All you need is God.
Hello there, You think the end is near... because nothing's ever clear.. anymore. Instead of using ever clear just use clear And everything changes, you sit and watch, as your ...
Feb 11, 2011 -
Re: Sappy Love Poem
Hello there. You open the doors Better just keep it as "door" You let me in Your way of saying you love me You wink at me Make me grin, ...
Feb 10, 2011 -
Re: Wind
I loved it. It was very well executed. You almost covered all of the points which the picture shows to us. Very good use of vocabulary. Awesome word selection. Howling ...
Feb 10, 2011 -
Re: Encased in My Nightmare
Encased in a nightmare I hide behind my hands Waiting for it to disappear Waiting for it to Disperse Does not sound good. Better keep it with the previous line ...
Feb 10, 2011 -
Re: Lake Side
These photographs are really awesome.... I loved them all especially the first one. It is just so abstract but real. I have nothing much to critique about it because i ...
Feb 10, 2011 -
Re: Broken heart
Even today when I listen to those songs it brings old memories along. Those meetings, those calls. Were they false or had any meaning at all? Still I try to ...
Feb 7, 2011 -
Re: Raging Calm
This is a good one... I really loved it a lot. I like your keen of such marvelous words. It makes the poem look beautiful and original. As it is ...
Feb 7, 2011 -
Re: Untitled
If we were to talk a while Good start You'd be sure to know That all I want is to see you smile And for it not to show That ...
Feb 6, 2011 -
Re: Colorful
I'm here again with my drawings.... :smt002 Hope you people enjoy them again..... These girls over here are colorful... I love them a lot.... 1.Socks 2.Catch the flying thingy I ...
Feb 5, 2011 -
Re: Innocent Words
Innocent words, prickling skin. "That's a nice hat! They don't usually suit people with frizzy hair." Sweet as honey, stab in the back. "Wow, I love your new top! I ...
Feb 5, 2011 -
Re: The beautiful simple things
It is a beautiful photograph... Did you take it yourself?? By the way is it a three leaf clover or a four leaf clover? Everything is awesome except the thing ...
Feb 5, 2011 -
Re: Women
There was a girl who always dreamt to touch the sky; There was a girl who always wished like a bird she could fly. There was a girl who would ...
Feb 1, 2011 -
Re: Photos for Animal Lovers!
Hey there. I just love animals whatever it be so this title of yours dragged to your work and when i saw them i was amazed. I loved every single ...
Feb 1, 2011 -
Re: Picture Perfect
Hey there. This a a very good piece. Very well done mate. It brings out some raw emotions which is very good for a poem like this. Some of the ...
Feb 1, 2011
