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Re: I Frame My Future
Hello there Noelle. I just dropped by to give you a review so here it goes. What would it be if the Earth turned not? By this do you mean, ...
Feb 27, 2011 -
Re: Dream
Hello there Rob. This is an amazing piece you have here. It comes right from the heart. I think that you just penned down emotions and converted it into a ...
Feb 27, 2011 -
Re: Ambition
Hello there virsanity. You have a good poem here, but your main problem is that you struggle a lot with the rhymes. Here in this piece some verses are rhyming, ...
Feb 27, 2011 -
Re: I called you lover, you called me forever.
Hello there Eraqio.... We shall directly step down for the review.. Here we go... From the lips of people , we say we love, lips of people? Then whose lips ...
Feb 27, 2011 -
Re: The Wizard of Oz
I am so obsessed with The Wizard of Oz that i wrote few verse on it and i would like to share it with you people over here. I am ...
Feb 20, 2011 -
Re: Gone
Hello there Alex. Here i am as you wanted me to be. Why do you want us to tear it up if you really like it? I could not really ...
Feb 20, 2011 -
Re: Just a dream
I saw you in my dream. Yes it was you. It had started to dew. I can’t explain how I felt. Yes I really saw you. You were smiling at ...
Feb 20, 2011 -
Re: The Last Art
Hello there. First i want to say that you have a great command on your vocabulary because you just bombarded my brain with some of your blasting words. This was ...
Feb 20, 2011 -
Re: Is this love?
I wrote this piece specially for Valentine's Day but i got a bit late on submitting it so here it is... There’s something in the air, can’t you feel it? ...
Feb 18, 2011 -
Re: Watcha Lookin' At?
Hello there sheep. Really liked your work and always have liked them. It is amazingly great and as you say it is just a doodle you did, this shows your ...
Feb 18, 2011 -
Re: Spring
Hello there, When the warm sun comes up, and the snow melts away. When the children come out, and find fun games to play. instead of fun games just use ...
Feb 18, 2011 -
Re: just for two moments
Hello there. You work looks very clumsy at dirty at the very first sight. Let us see what is inside. Just for two moments it just me or i have ...
Feb 15, 2011 -
Re: Heart Cloud on Valentine's Day
Hahaha.... Awesome shot.. Not photographically perfect but then also it is awesomely awesome. But it does not look like a heart which suits valentine's day... It seems as if the ...
Feb 15, 2011 -
Re: Green
Hello there, Green is the edge of grass, shooting up in spring a very good start green is the color of my finger when I wear my favorite ring. Green ...
Feb 15, 2011 -
Re: Homemade Chocolates & A Card
Hello there... Heart-shaped paper scissor-cut Laced with red trim, Box of homemade chocolates delicately wrapped with care, Sunglasses darkly tinted hide my eyes, And I hope that you won’t stare- ...
Feb 15, 2011
