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Hello there. I am here for the review as asked. It is a good piece with good use of words and imagery but it would be better if you had ...

Hello there. I loved this poem a lot. You have got great imagery. A perfect flow with great rhyming skills. And no grammatical mistakes as much as i can see ...

Hello there. It was a good piece of poetry and i liked it too but it had no flow. And please do add some punctuations to your poem. It would ...

Hello there. I did not find it to be much of a poem. It was just a story chopped down to be into stanzas so that it looks like one. ...

Hello there. This is a perfectly simple enjoyable poem and also has a good message in it but that one thing that bothered everyone else, that bothered me too. Apples, ...

Hello there. I'm Ehte here for the review. The little boy came out to play, And immediately wished he hadn't. A good start. The giant bullies darted towards him; giant ...

Hello there. I'm Ehte here for the review. Out of the corner of my eye, I see you. In the depths of my heart, From the depths of my heart, ...

Hello there. I am Ehte here for the review. I like this poem very much. You have done a great work with imagery. The description of spring was in a ...

Hello there. I'm Ehte here for the review. Have you ever hear an angel cry, Have you ever heard an angel cry, while it sang it's mournful tune? It shatters ...

Hello there. I am Ehte here for the review. This was a good poem but it had some ups and downs as all poems have(except some). First of all, did ...

Hello there. This is a very nice piece of poetry though it does not have any particular rhyme scheme but the flow is really very good. It invokes raw emotions ...

I wrote down whatever came to my mind and i came up with this. I am much satisfied by this because i am a rhyme person and i have never ...

But, great job on the poem guys. I find it hard to imagine that Ranger Hawk did this. Seems more ehte style! No, no, no, no... This is our mixed ...

Hello Neha. Namaste. And guess what? I am Indian too. There are loads of Indians on this site. It is always good to see a fellow Indian on YWS. What ...

Sorry,but if it was creepiness you wanted then you failed with me. However I find this poem more humorous than anything. We wanted it to be humorous so i think ...