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Re: All's My Fault
Just one small thing for I am in hurry. Please forgive me for being so abrupt. I think the 'who' in the first line should be 'whom'. Sorry I mistyped ...
Apr 11, 2011 -
Re: All Rise And Touch The Skies
Entry 10:Ehte's NaPo Journal. Maiden Of Faith Illuminate the walls of these dark grey halls. For tonight my love, I need incantations for as to heed. Soul of my, liberates ...
Apr 10, 2011 -
Re: All's My Fault
Whom did her eyes search, in this vast ocean of vagabonds? Travelers of desire wandering around. The more they walked. The more they were separated. Dreams were their destiny and, ...
Apr 9, 2011 -
Re: lanky fingers and rosy cheeks.
Hello there. You have a very confusing poem over here. You have totally messed a lot of things together over here. It lacks structure. It lacks rhythm. It lacks flow. ...
Apr 9, 2011 -
Re: me, the robot
Hello there. I'm Ehte, here for the review. I can totally agree with the reviewers from above. There is no structure to it. Well, it's free verse so I didn't ...
Apr 9, 2011 -
Re: hi there :)
Hello and welcome to YWS, GB62. I like your name. Seems like a name of an Android. XD I'm Ehte. If you have any queries or just want to talk ...
Apr 9, 2011 -
Re: Angel Of Death Along With Bass
Evil Death 31032011355.jpg Fender Bender Custom title © Lumi 09042011373.jpg I hope you guys like it. :smt003
Apr 9, 2011 -
Re: All Rise And Touch The Skies
Entry 9:Ehte's NaPo Journal. All's My Fault Who did her eyes search, in this vast ocean of vagabonds? Travelers of desire wandering around. The more they walked. The more they ...
Apr 9, 2011 -
Re: Introducing myself.. a few months too late.
Hello and welcome to YWS, Sio. I'm Ehte. If you have any queries or just want to talk just let me know. I hope you enjoy your stay here. Everyone ...
Apr 9, 2011 -
Re: YWS: Best out there!
OMG! All the Nathaniel's are so awesome. *salutes*
Apr 8, 2011 -
Re: All Rise And Touch The Skies
I do not know what this is. But its... something. :? Entry 8:Ehte's NaPo Journal. Don't Go I miss you a lot. I want to love you more than you ...
Apr 8, 2011 -
Re: hello all
Hello and welcome to YWS, nungkutre23. I'm Ehte. If you have any queries or just want to talk just let me know. I hope you enjoy your stay here. Everyone ...
Apr 8, 2011 -
Re: Hello!
Hello and welcome back to YWS not-so-new newbie. XD Best of luck for your novel. Hope to see you around. :smt003
Apr 8, 2011 -
Re: untitled (open to suggestions)
Hello there. I'm Ehte, here for the review. Where are the punctuation marks? Add punctuation marks to it. Without them your poem is like a single line. They are a ...
Apr 7, 2011 -
Re: All Rise And Touch The Skies
Entry 7:Ehte's NaPo Journal. Neurosis I feel my split personas debate, they try to go their separate ways. My insouciance is a mask I wear. Your insolence; yet not a ...
Apr 7, 2011