eastarcher

Wow. This is really an incredible poem...and very, very simple. I loved the tone, and the opening lines, and the severity of the images even though they were brief. There ...

I really like this one. The thunder is a great motif. It feels creepy, and, in the context of the poem, gives me chills. All of the imagery is that ...

The emotions here were expressed well, and I definitely felt them as I read the poem. With such a tried theme as unrequited love, it's easy to fall into self-righteousness ...

I have to say that you are very talented. There are many ways to present servitude and aging, and I think you chose yours well, with much tact. The imagery ...

Oh my gosh. I read a lot of poems from unknown names online...and I have to say that this is one of the best, if not the best one I've ...