easilyinspired

Well done this is a really original poem. Yeah, everybody else is right, you can relate to it. Keep Writing! XxX :D

Hiya and welcome to YWS! Okay, I really like the idea for your story and it's very well written. However there is something about it that doesn't quite flow. I ...

Hey, I really enjoyed reading your writing because I can think that everybody can relate to Katy in one way or another. I have friend who is just like her, ...

Hi and Merry Christmas! I really enjoyed reading your work, you have great style of writing. I like the way you tie in the facts with the action, it's a ...

Hello everybody! This is my first post, I will write more if you guys think it's worthwhile. Any feedback will be appriciated, I hope you enjoy! The Arrival It had ...

Hello! Merry Christmas! As soon as I read your peom I fell in love with it. It is captivating, so original and just absolutely delicious! I salute you, you are ...

Cool, I really like it. It's really original! I especially like the line "The Earl was drunk." That line is clever, yeah there's just something about this poem. I'm not ...

Hello and Merry Christmas!!!! I like the start of your story, the description of the characters is great, the way you tie it in with the action. I really like ...

Wow, I love it!!! I like the way you have started it, the link of the sky is very clever. It's a fantastic piece of writing but I'll tell you ...

AMAZING!!! I love it, keep writing!

Ahh, you just have to love it! XxX

Hey, I really like this!!! It hints at what could happen, and it really makes me want to read on. Keep writing!!!

Wow, this is great! You should keep on writing it, it looks like it could turn into something really amazing. I like your style of writing it's really down to ...

This story is great, I love this part: "I remember how I was happy for getting older and smarter. I remember meeting good people. I still have in mind how ...

Yeah, I like this story. The fact that it's written in first person is great, i love the little comments Max makes in his/her head. It makes it more personal ...