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Re: the angel nobody appreciated
Hello, fancy seeing you here!! LOL! Amazing poem as they all are and I still have the last lines that you ripped off the bottom of your poem! You are ...
Jan 30, 2011 -
Re: To The Boy In The Red Feathers
Hey :D Great poem!!! It's all true aswell which is even better, because people can relate to it. Nice work! Keep Writing X
Jan 11, 2011 -
Re: Love & Lust
Hey :D I love your poem!!! It's really realistic and as you read it you know exactly what each line means. Some poems are just a load of gibberish but ...
Jan 11, 2011 -
Re: Unknown Emotion
Hey, I love this piece. I agree with all of what WaywardBird said. I just loved it, keep writing it! XxX
Jan 1, 2011 -
Re: New Year's Romance
Hey, It's perfect, the perfect New Year's romance! I love it, well done! Happy New Year!!! Keep Writing XxX
Jan 1, 2011 -
Re: Toothpicks
Hey, Great story, however there are a few points I have to make. First of all there are some major puncuation errors, I mean I didn't know what was going ...
Jan 1, 2011 -
Re: My friend Wacky.
Thanks, I really appriciate your advice! XxX
Dec 26, 2010 -
Re: Hello Again, Christmas.
Hello, This poem is fantastic! The way that you can get so much meaning out of everyday winter things is incredible. You are a very talented writer! I think this ...
Dec 26, 2010 -
Re: A Christmas Sketch
Hi there! Your poem is really interesting, it's a different take on christmas and it works really well. The only thing is the balance of vocabulary isn't quite right. It's ...
Dec 26, 2010 -
Re: My friend Wacky.
Hello, this is a poem I wrote about my friend Wacky. I hope you enjoy it and any feedback would be appriciated. I'm not really a poet, so this is ...
Dec 26, 2010 -
Re: Mask
Hi, Your poem is really effective. The impression it makes on you is quite impressive, and it's very dramatic (wise move putting it in dramatic, LOL)!
Dec 26, 2010 -
Re: Special
Wow, well let me tell you, it worked! Good job! I agree with the others you do have to re-read it and think about it. Plus it will mean something ...
Dec 26, 2010 -
Re: Despair
Cool, kind of weird but cool. I think you should keep writing, but I'm not really sure where you could take this. Therefore keep writing it because I have no ...
Dec 26, 2010 -
Re: That lonely road (Memory Lane) Part 1
Hey! Another piece of fantastic writing. Okay, so there are some major grammar errors but you can sort them out yourself. Yeah, give us more description! Include sight, smell, touch, ...
Dec 26, 2010 -
Re: The Most Wonderful Time of the Year
Ahhhh, that was really cute! XxX
Dec 26, 2010
