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  • Romantic Short Stories Re: The Lone Lily

    Anything good about it??!!??

    May 30, 2011
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: The Lone Lily

    Hey guys, enjoy... Any feedback would be appreciated. Thanks xxx Lily sat alone, in the dark, confused and lost. The moonlight filtered through the curtains casting shadows across the room. ...

    May 30, 2011
  • Action/Adventure Novels Re: "The Glass Ballerina"

    Hi :) This is amazing, I really like it. You've got a fantastic idea for an entertaining story,I thoroughly enjoyed reading your work. There are a few points in the ...

    May 29, 2011
  • General Articles Re: Night or the World

    Hello :D Wow this is great, I really like the way this is written because what you have written about is something that is a little confusing, and unclear if ...

    May 29, 2011
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: Wedding Day

    Hello :D I really enjoyed reading this piece, and I like the portrayal of emotions. I think that when you wrote this you had it planned out exactly in your ...

    May 5, 2011
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: The Truth Behind the Haunting of Bramble House.

    Hey guys, I wrote this for an English assesment a couple of months ago. I hope you enjoy it and any feedback would be appreciated. XXX A spider crawled up ...

    Mar 3, 2011
  • Lyrics Re: My boy

    Hey :D I like this alot, I could imagine it as a proper song. Good work. :D

    Feb 21, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Today

    heyyy :D I really like this, good job. Keep Writing! XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX

    Feb 21, 2011
  • Narrative Poetry Re: A Story

    Hey :D This isn't half bad, in fact it's rather good actually! I really like it because it's very original and it's thoughtful. Good job :D XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX

    Feb 21, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Nothing's gonna be okay

    W.O.W!!! I wish I could write like you, this is just pure talent. Keep writing!!! XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX

    Feb 21, 2011
  • Lyrics Re: All Dressed in Black -A Ballad

    heyyy i like it!!! it works really well, do you play an instrument cuz if you do you should come up with a tune for it! xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

    Feb 21, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Wind

    This is fantastic, amazing use of metaphors. You capture emotions perfectly, get a damn good publishing deal. XXX

    Feb 10, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: Sappy Love Poem

    Hi, I really like this poem, it's kind of tradditional with a realistic approach. Keep Writing. BTW love the pic. XXXX

    Feb 10, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: The Heart is the passage

    Heyyyy. I love this, good use of metaphors, Hendo would be proud! lol :D Thorpie is sat next to me taking the mick out of everything i write, what a ...

    Feb 10, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Red-Striped Replacement

    Love it!

    Jan 31, 2011


Half the work that is done in this world is to make things appear what they are not.
— Elias Root Beadle