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Re: The Lone Lily
Anything good about it??!!??
May 30, 2011 -
Re: The Lone Lily
Hey guys, enjoy... Any feedback would be appreciated. Thanks xxx Lily sat alone, in the dark, confused and lost. The moonlight filtered through the curtains casting shadows across the room. ...
May 30, 2011 -
Re: "The Glass Ballerina"
Hi :) This is amazing, I really like it. You've got a fantastic idea for an entertaining story,I thoroughly enjoyed reading your work. There are a few points in the ...
May 29, 2011 -
Re: Night or the World
Hello :D Wow this is great, I really like the way this is written because what you have written about is something that is a little confusing, and unclear if ...
May 29, 2011 -
Re: Wedding Day
Hello :D I really enjoyed reading this piece, and I like the portrayal of emotions. I think that when you wrote this you had it planned out exactly in your ...
May 5, 2011 -
Re: The Truth Behind the Haunting of Bramble House.
Hey guys, I wrote this for an English assesment a couple of months ago. I hope you enjoy it and any feedback would be appreciated. XXX A spider crawled up ...
Mar 3, 2011 -
Re: My boy
Hey :D I like this alot, I could imagine it as a proper song. Good work. :D
Feb 21, 2011 -
Re: Today
heyyy :D I really like this, good job. Keep Writing! XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX
Feb 21, 2011 -
Re: A Story
Hey :D This isn't half bad, in fact it's rather good actually! I really like it because it's very original and it's thoughtful. Good job :D XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX
Feb 21, 2011 -
Re: Nothing's gonna be okay
W.O.W!!! I wish I could write like you, this is just pure talent. Keep writing!!! XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX
Feb 21, 2011 -
Re: All Dressed in Black -A Ballad
heyyy i like it!!! it works really well, do you play an instrument cuz if you do you should come up with a tune for it! xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
Feb 21, 2011 -
Re: Wind
This is fantastic, amazing use of metaphors. You capture emotions perfectly, get a damn good publishing deal. XXX
Feb 10, 2011 -
Re: Sappy Love Poem
Hi, I really like this poem, it's kind of tradditional with a realistic approach. Keep Writing. BTW love the pic. XXXX
Feb 10, 2011 -
Re: The Heart is the passage
Heyyyy. I love this, good use of metaphors, Hendo would be proud! lol :D Thorpie is sat next to me taking the mick out of everything i write, what a ...
Feb 10, 2011 -
Re: Red-Striped Replacement
Love it!
Jan 31, 2011
