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Re: Encore
You know what to do. OH, and girl-who-supplies-my-pigeons.... please don't hunt me down. My creativity is dead, you see. kthxbai. even you couldn't extend your palms - not with planets ...
Mar 15, 2011 -
Re: An Ode To Mathematics
I thought you were going to write about how much you love math - I am very glad to see that this is actually the complete opposite. :P
Mar 14, 2011 -
Re: Unfinished Apology
Agree with Coral. For me it's not so much confusing (I'm perfectly aware with the fact that I don't understand the poem, but I'm not confused.. if that makes sense ...
Mar 1, 2011 -
Re: My Crush Ate My Homework
When I was in grade eight, I was taking an advanced language arts class. The only problem with the class was that the teacher was a complete idiot... so much ...
Feb 28, 2011 -
Re: Anorexic One
First off, nice piece. Not that I like the subject, but I'm always interested in seeing writers try to tackle it. Usually not a big fan of rhyming poetry because ...
Feb 20, 2011 -
Re: Haunted
I think this piece holds some potential, given a good polish. The first thing I noticed right off the bat was the way you started with "I" quite frequently. It'd ...
Feb 19, 2011 -
Re: Drawn Onward
Pro: this definitely gives me the sense of battling against the wind, walking through snow with numb limbs and such. The overall image is good, and you did really well ...
Feb 19, 2011 -
Re: Haiku Battle
Death's icy breath crawls within your bones; silent eyes are cold and lifeless.
Feb 16, 2011 -
Re: Haiku Battle
false accusations; the console of the mind's eye is malfunctioning.
Feb 10, 2011 -
Re: A Mountain of Hunger
Alrighty. It's 1:30 AM. Freakin' tired. But with a slightly warm mug of mocha sleep deficiency, I suppose I'm ready to go. xD G'morning Persy. Let's get started, shall we? ...
Feb 10, 2011 -
Re: Doritos: The Finger-Licker
I'd say you proved your point well... especially considering that in light of this, that commercial is about 10 thousand times as creepy as it was before. TV commercials are ...
Feb 10, 2011 -
Re: A Mountain of Hunger
I really need to review this soon. Gosh. Sorry. I'll get back to it as soon as I can. and THEN the party starts.
Feb 9, 2011 -
Re: Crash
Personally I'm not a big fan of the style, but that doesn't make it bad poetry. That's just my opinion. You are hit by the fractal doom, shot down, lacerated, ...
Feb 8, 2011 -
Re: Kattt (My comic strip)
Haha! I actually laughed on a bunch of these, your comics are awesome! Keep up the good work :)
Feb 5, 2011 -
Re: SOS
Wait.. but doesn't morse code use sounds to communicate? Unless you meant actually writing down the dots and lines... then I guess that would work. Or, you may have meant ...
Feb 4, 2011
