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earendil

  • Other Poetry Re: Encore

    You know what to do. OH, and girl-who-supplies-my-pigeons.... please don't hunt me down. My creativity is dead, you see. kthxbai. even you couldn't extend your palms - not with planets ...

    Mar 15, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: An Ode To Mathematics

    I thought you were going to write about how much you love math - I am very glad to see that this is actually the complete opposite. :P

    Mar 14, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Unfinished Apology

    Agree with Coral. For me it's not so much confusing (I'm perfectly aware with the fact that I don't understand the poem, but I'm not confused.. if that makes sense ...

    Mar 1, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: My Crush Ate My Homework

    When I was in grade eight, I was taking an advanced language arts class. The only problem with the class was that the teacher was a complete idiot... so much ...

    Feb 28, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Anorexic One

    First off, nice piece. Not that I like the subject, but I'm always interested in seeing writers try to tackle it. Usually not a big fan of rhyming poetry because ...

    Feb 20, 2011
  • Narrative Poetry Re: Haunted

    I think this piece holds some potential, given a good polish. The first thing I noticed right off the bat was the way you started with "I" quite frequently. It'd ...

    Feb 19, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Drawn Onward

    Pro: this definitely gives me the sense of battling against the wind, walking through snow with numb limbs and such. The overall image is good, and you did really well ...

    Feb 19, 2011
  • Writing Activities Re: Haiku Battle

    Death's icy breath crawls within your bones; silent eyes are cold and lifeless.

    Feb 16, 2011
  • Writing Activities Re: Haiku Battle

    false accusations; the console of the mind's eye is malfunctioning.

    Feb 10, 2011
  • Narrative Poetry Re: A Mountain of Hunger

    Alrighty. It's 1:30 AM. Freakin' tired. But with a slightly warm mug of mocha sleep deficiency, I suppose I'm ready to go. xD G'morning Persy. Let's get started, shall we? ...

    Feb 10, 2011
  • Media Reviews Re: Doritos: The Finger-Licker

    I'd say you proved your point well... especially considering that in light of this, that commercial is about 10 thousand times as creepy as it was before. TV commercials are ...

    Feb 10, 2011
  • Narrative Poetry Re: A Mountain of Hunger

    I really need to review this soon. Gosh. Sorry. I'll get back to it as soon as I can. and THEN the party starts.

    Feb 9, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Crash

    Personally I'm not a big fan of the style, but that doesn't make it bad poetry. That's just my opinion. You are hit by the fractal doom, shot down, lacerated, ...

    Feb 8, 2011
  • Art & Photography Re: Kattt (My comic strip)

    Haha! I actually laughed on a bunch of these, your comics are awesome! Keep up the good work :)

    Feb 5, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: SOS

    Wait.. but doesn't morse code use sounds to communicate? Unless you meant actually writing down the dots and lines... then I guess that would work. Or, you may have meant ...

    Feb 4, 2011


Surround yourself with people who are serious about being writers, and who will tell you, ‘Hey—you can do better than this.’ Who will be critical of your work, but also supportive. And who will not be competitive in a negative way.
— Isabel Quintero