earendil

I'll be there when you come home, if you ever choose to return at all.

and I can't quite see if it's heaven at the bottom, or something a bit more akin to hell-- I have to get closer. I cover my feet in holy ...

The lion picture reminded me of this: The first time I watched that video I was like HOMG I WANT A LION. haha. :) Anyway - that's all I really ...

I'm not going to go into much detail, considering other reviewers have already done that for me. I haven't read through any of the reviews, but I'm assuming they're throrough ...

You feel that? Breathe it in. That's excitement. - my eyes travel through the fibers of the carpet, my room is in cascades and the television is left on, simply ...

I really like that first one - the way you positioned the picture beneath the flower to capture it... I'm not much of a photographer, so I don't know what's ...

I'm not of much use on things other than poetry or prose, but I'll see if I can give this a shot when I have more time to think it ...

Heh. As Snoink said, this was a bit dull for poetry. I wouldn't necessarily make it "fun" to read.. but make sure the overall tone of the poem matches the ...

I missed out being in the top whatever it is by one review :'( Even more of a reason why you should totally pwn next month.

Welcome to you as well, Patz. :)

Hey, welcome to YWS! Hope you enjoy your stay here! If you need any reviews or have any questions, feel free to shoot me a private message or post the ...

Hey there, Arty :) As the others have already said, chat speak doesn't really fly too well with some people so I'd be careful about it. You won't get trampled ...

there are a lot less detail that regular writing Interesting... well. Considering my prefered style of poetry is quite different from yours, I'd be inclined to say that lack of ...

First thing I noticed was that you don't really follow a specific rhythm. While some poets take syllable counts and perfect rhymes rather seriously when it comes to reviewing poetry, ...

Heya - I'm Ear, and I'll be your reviewer for this evening. I'll start off with the positives. In light of the fact that I'm heavily leaning toward majoring in ...