earendil

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Haha! Very clever. My first impression was something along the lines of "damn.. harsh." Once I got around to the end, though, I immediately recalled numerous times where I had ...

Overall I thought this was pretty good. The structure was a bit everywhere - in the future I suggest perhaps polishing your poems a bit before posting them? Again, it's ...

Change that shouldn't have felt new, tiny center square of a rubik's cube, but we watched those colors diffuse; now where there's white, belongs blue. She extends herself to her ...

Overall I thought this had a good flow to it. If I may make a suggestion, perhaps lose some of the periods? You don't necessarily need them after every line, ...

This, to me, sounds like a discussion between two people from the viewpoint of one. One of them sounds a bit ignorant (ignorance is bliss), while the other (the speaker ...

The streetlights stand cold against my eyes, glazed with disinfectant and a hint of resentment toward the way they tower above me like trees; I can only howl with the ...

Very impressive.. I've never really heard anyone describe the moon in such a way (it is about the moon.. right? :P). Your lines have a good flow, and the rhyme ...

They talk the talk, but they don't walk the walk. I absolutely hate that phrase, but Lord knows it's pretty damn true. I'm Christian, and I agree with a lot ...

I really like the concept of the piece, and the image of the choir calling to the moon. The way you word your sentences was a bit confusing at first, ...

Please excuse me if some of this doesn't make sense. I'm not sure how to exlain some of it. Overall, it's obvious that you're a very skilled writer... and that ...

Overall, I like the piece, though there are definitely some rough spots that need fixing. Your stanzas feel more like short and precise statements; while it's beneficial in that you ...