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earendil

  • Narrative Poetry Re: Idolatry

    I believe my thoughts are on webpoet. But I'll come back again and see if I can find anything else when I haz time. :)

    Jan 18, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: This Sky Will Betray You

    This sky will betray you. At this very moment, you're sitting in a chair, adjusting your eyes to the light of your window and learning how to be alone. You're ...

    Jan 17, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: trash

    The window has nothing to offer to your half-hearted glance; crossing every distant star, surely I brought down the entire night sky for you, and all you could do was ...

    Jan 17, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Baby Doll

    I like your writing style in all of the work I've read so far. Your language is definitely different, but I like it. Anyway. Splitting this into thirds because I've ...

    Jan 17, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: (unnamed)

    Ha. For a first attempt, it sure as hell is better than anything I came up with when I was starting out. Definitely keep writing! :) And great poem you've ...

    Jan 17, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: The Museum of Dark Artifacts

    First off, I have a question: why is it that some poets capitalize the first letter of every line? I don't mean I have a problem with it, it's just ...

    Jan 17, 2011
  • Lounge, The Re: Why did you start writing?

    Junior high advanced language arts helped with vocabulary and somewhat technique. Other than that, it has always just been a way of expression and communication. I met a poet about ...

    Jan 16, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: Tongue Tied

    I. It's back to staring at the world through a dusty bus window in the morning; 'twas time for sunrise, time for words to be carved into the sea for ...

    Jan 16, 2011
  • Art & Photography Re: New Style

    Haha, I love this shot! The colors in it are so beautiful - great job! :)

    Jan 16, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: Some Haikus

    Haha. The topics are a little cliche, but I like these poems all the same. One thing I'd like to say is that I really like that you used bigger ...

    Jan 15, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Maroon

    You've got a great image going with this piece - I really like the portion about the dreams, with "waking sleep." Good contrast of words. My only suggestion is to ...

    Jan 15, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Truths

    Hiya Coral. I don't have many issues with this one (most of them have been pointed out/fixed, so yeah), but there are a few things I'd like to point out. ...

    Jan 15, 2011
  • Art & Photography Re: Photos! (Project 365 - day 4-11)

    Wow, these are some awesome shots! Especially that last one, and the puzzle one. Those were definitely my favorites. :) The guitar one sort of gives me a headache, though. ...

    Jan 15, 2011
  • Art & Photography Re: Skandar Keynes [pencil]

    I am in no way as talented as you when it comes to drawing, so obviously I can't really review this in the most productive way. But, I must say, ...

    Jan 15, 2011
  • Narrative Poetry Re: Remember That Night?

    This is a bit cliche for my taste, but then again, everyone feels like this at one time or another... so I guess that's kind of expected out of love ...

    Jan 15, 2011


What we do for ourselves dies with us. What we do for others and the world remains and is immortal.
— Albert Pines