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Re: Idolatry
I believe my thoughts are on webpoet. But I'll come back again and see if I can find anything else when I haz time. :)
Jan 18, 2011 -
Re: This Sky Will Betray You
This sky will betray you. At this very moment, you're sitting in a chair, adjusting your eyes to the light of your window and learning how to be alone. You're ...
Jan 17, 2011 -
Re: trash
The window has nothing to offer to your half-hearted glance; crossing every distant star, surely I brought down the entire night sky for you, and all you could do was ...
Jan 17, 2011 -
Re: Baby Doll
I like your writing style in all of the work I've read so far. Your language is definitely different, but I like it. Anyway. Splitting this into thirds because I've ...
Jan 17, 2011 -
Re: (unnamed)
Ha. For a first attempt, it sure as hell is better than anything I came up with when I was starting out. Definitely keep writing! :) And great poem you've ...
Jan 17, 2011 -
Re: The Museum of Dark Artifacts
First off, I have a question: why is it that some poets capitalize the first letter of every line? I don't mean I have a problem with it, it's just ...
Jan 17, 2011 -
Re: Why did you start writing?
Junior high advanced language arts helped with vocabulary and somewhat technique. Other than that, it has always just been a way of expression and communication. I met a poet about ...
Jan 16, 2011 -
Re: Tongue Tied
I. It's back to staring at the world through a dusty bus window in the morning; 'twas time for sunrise, time for words to be carved into the sea for ...
Jan 16, 2011 -
Re: New Style
Haha, I love this shot! The colors in it are so beautiful - great job! :)
Jan 16, 2011 -
Re: Some Haikus
Haha. The topics are a little cliche, but I like these poems all the same. One thing I'd like to say is that I really like that you used bigger ...
Jan 15, 2011 -
Re: Maroon
You've got a great image going with this piece - I really like the portion about the dreams, with "waking sleep." Good contrast of words. My only suggestion is to ...
Jan 15, 2011 -
Re: Truths
Hiya Coral. I don't have many issues with this one (most of them have been pointed out/fixed, so yeah), but there are a few things I'd like to point out. ...
Jan 15, 2011 -
Re: Photos! (Project 365 - day 4-11)
Wow, these are some awesome shots! Especially that last one, and the puzzle one. Those were definitely my favorites. :) The guitar one sort of gives me a headache, though. ...
Jan 15, 2011 -
Re: Skandar Keynes [pencil]
I am in no way as talented as you when it comes to drawing, so obviously I can't really review this in the most productive way. But, I must say, ...
Jan 15, 2011 -
Re: Remember That Night?
This is a bit cliche for my taste, but then again, everyone feels like this at one time or another... so I guess that's kind of expected out of love ...
Jan 15, 2011
