earendil

deep into her arm, emptying all the chambers, into my thirsty mouth. I throw the devoured corpse into the road, and contemplate what will I have, I picked out lines ...

One morning I woke up and decided that I'd warn them about the monsters waiting in hell; they looked at me with curious eyes, wondering if maybe I could be ...

I thought that, overall, this was a great piece. Your ideas were not only a constant stream throughout the poem, but a connection as well. You mentioned different details earlier ...

I'd say these are pretty freakin good, considering your circumstances, haha. I really love the first photo - did you edit to make it that blue color, or is that ...

1- I think this one could definitely be better. The colors aren't quite as vivid as they are in your other pictures, and parts of the leaf are a bit ...

Here's the thing: you've always been good to me. Always. Not just good, but great. I've never not been impressed (terrible wording, I know, I know) by something you write. ...

Hahaha. I love flash :D These are awesome!

Evening, Kafka. First off, your descriptions are definitely changing. :P I was pleasantly surprised (and slightly curious) at the detail that poured into this. Now, while this is very detailed, ...

Bring on the poison, mate. If anything, at least my soul will still be intact when everything's all said and done. Then, out of his passionate love for me, he'll ...

Dark, The fingernails of shadow Scrape at the window. While I love these lines, I have to admit, it's a pretty common image to the point where it's sort of ...

That dawg keeps likin' muh FACE. D: I'm a fan of bigger dogs anyway. Ahh what the heck. 9/10 :D

I absolutely adore the second shot. and I mean, adore :D I would like the first one, but... there's something about it. Perhaps it's the coloring. It looks like it ...

Thank you, everyone, who took the time to comment. I appreciate all of you stopping by. Originally, this wasn't supposed to be much of a poem. Though.. for the sake ...

Iz wush hish fashe :D Grandma translation: I love his face :D I would tell you that the shoulders are a little wide and that the body is a little ...

Shall I throw pennies in a well, making magic wishes? you may want to use something different here, such as "wasting them on wishes." what you have is good, though ...