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There isn't much too much I can say to critique this and/or compliment it. Though this poem has a different message than the first Cyborg poem, it's all pretty much ...

Alrighty. If you did not know (how could you know? I haven't told you yet :P), I'm a huge fan of riddles. Not the best at solving them, but a ...

There is something mechanical about it – not at all like clockwork, but more like flashing red lights and spiked metal gears, You do this in every stanza, where you ...

You did a pretty good job with this. When I first started reading I was expecting there to be a rhyme scheme and was caught a bit off guard when ...

Hiya. I'll be reviewing your poem this evening (or morning, or whatever time it is). First off, I'd like to add some punctuation to your piece. Hold on to your ...

Very well written - in a way it gives me one of those "good things fall apart so that better can fall together" sort of feeling. Even if I didn't ...

Coral. Coral, Coral, Coral, Coral, Coral. My mind is a blistered crusade, vengeful to the words you speak and the tones in which you say them-- you hold ideas in ...

I really have nothing else to say to this, other than it made my day. Thank you for sharing this :)

Hiya Coral. Let's get started, shaaalll we? (First off, I didn't read through much of the comments that have already been posted, so if I end up repeating something they ...

Nice picture! I think the way the black fades looks cool. Though the picture itself, just... with the way it looks, sort of makes my eyes hurt. :P What did ...

I'd have to say that my favorite poet is either Robert Frost or e.e. cummings. Actually picking a poem out and calling it my favorite is a different story, though.. ...

This is pretty amazing, in my book. I've read it quite a few times and I still can't really think of anything to say. Though, yes, it could be written ...

Hiya Kafka. I agree with Lumi's comments; as I said in another poem, your words are often blocked by your abundance of commas. I was thinking that perhaps, even with ...

Great poem! There are a couple of things that could be nitpicked a bit, but that would be boring to type out because they're almost irrelevant to the overall message ...

I agree, I totally love your style of drawing. I looked at the first picture before even reading the bit that says the detail was supposed to look "awful," and ...