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I'm so over-analytical, it's irritating. Hate riddles! (kidding, kidding.) As the above comment said, my only other guess is water. But that almost seems too simple to be true. :P

Let's see. I'm going to go on a wild guess here and say that you have long brown hair, dark green/brown eyes, and you're probably really pretty. Though I could ...

Spread like a star, his hands are big Thick and strong, Compared to the line before and the ones that follow these two, your wording in these lines isn't very ...

Well. It appears that somebody else has beat me to a thorough review.. so instead of going into detail, I'll just suggest some things that stuck out most and leave ...

Your name rolls off my tongue, Gliding gracefully into the air Like a flower unfurling Its petals. Your dark hair is woven Into tightly spun Curls and waves , moving ...

You’re tracing thoughts into the lines of my palms semicolon...maybe? soft, gentle, HARD , digging your nails into the wrinkled This criticism is a bit one-sided, because I personally just ...

I won't even bother denying the fact that you got me to smile from beginning to end, and I even laughed in some parts. :P This is so awesome. I ...

Heya :) I like this - I'm a pretty big fan of pieces that utilize the movement of time and anything along those lines. Change is always something to ponder. ...

Time has a funny and sometimes cruel way of taking care of missed chances, sometimes. She also has a nasty habit of doing whatever we don't want her to do. ...

Alrighty. This is going to be a shorter review than normal, but a review all the same. As I said earlier today, try to use something other than a comma ...

Hiya :) I thought this was pretty good - I liked the idea of the piece, that is. Whether I like the style (I'll get to that in a minute) ...

Hey there, Kafka. Alrighty. First thing that I noticed right off the bat is that your enjambments are much more fluid than before, and also you stopped capitalizing the first ...

Why do you look out from a tainted window? Why do you wear shoes , C rushing the dewy green grass B eneath your mud - encrusted heals? Why do ...

I have her smile in my blood, she said with time dripping from her eyes; those words, I've never heard her say or thought to recognize; memories of love I ...

Good way to complete the series (I'm assuming this is your last one - if not, sorry about that :P). Something about this poem reminds me of one of my ...