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Re: Shatter me, Break me
I'll be coming back to this.
Dec 20, 2011 -
Re: contrition in a-minor
Hiya Lumi, it's been a while. After reading through this a few times, I think the poem grew on me bit. However, there are a few things that you may ...
Dec 18, 2011 -
Re: 1983
I've skimmed the reviews, and they all pretty much have to do with significance and elaboration. So for the sake of not repeating what they've said, we're just going to ...
Dec 13, 2011 -
Re: The Train to Work
Here, as I said I would be. This poem interested me the most so let's see what we have here. So, looking at this as a reader, the first thing ...
Dec 12, 2011 -
Re: somewhere, nowhere
. I had a dream last night where true love and true homes were nonexistent. I was violently torn from my own skin and you didn't bother showing up at ...
Dec 9, 2011 -
Re: Waking at dawn
Was posting this at 11:11 intentional? What am I going to do with you? -__- First stanza is lovely. I like the sincerity of your work. Never really sounds forced... ...
Dec 5, 2011 -
Re: Natural Anthem
world spins madly on. yes.
Dec 4, 2011 -
Re: death in my veins
Hiya Mikko, long time no see. Alright, what do we have here... hmm. This poem comes of as pretty self explanatory. The speaker is infected by a tragic loss of ...
Dec 2, 2011 -
Re: dementia
Sat by a sleeping man and gestured toward his hands, said nothing, closed them around a handful of water chestnuts and waited for the familiarity of my skin to float ...
Nov 29, 2011 -
Re: Dearest Max,
I haven't really reviewed anything of yours in a while, have I? hm. Well, I'll come back to this.
Sep 13, 2011 -
Re: confessions of a ghost
in the middle of a field rests a suicide dangling by an empty phone line-- lost words, silent eyes watching pigeons crash into windows, birds of a feather diving down ...
Sep 11, 2011 -
Re: Blade-Song
Suddenly not so much of a hopeless romantic. Okay. Well, let's see what we can do here. You have the flow down perfectly-- each word rolls into the next and ...
Sep 10, 2011 -
Re: Oil pastel art
The first one almost looks like the outline of a person, though when traced in blue it looks like an actual island in the ocean. That, or I'm totaly wacked ...
Sep 4, 2011 -
Re: nacht
I. there is a place where voices are calling out to you, all the time, everywhere-- a labyrinth where you never walk the same hallway twice, and where storms exist ...
Sep 3, 2011 -
Re: Hunter
I'm just going to get straight to the point with this one. Feeling a bit lazy after this week. I. Elaborate! It's your story, you control it, you can have ...
Aug 27, 2011
