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Thank you to all the critique and compliments! :} I FINALLY edited it all! Hahaha, I hope it's better now! More critique?

Thank you for the critique. I appreciate it. However, I would like to comment on a few things...Back up my reasons, I suppose. the "repeated stops" are there for effect. ...

Thank you, very much! I'll make changes. And the spacing for dialogue is meant to be that way, but I can change it if necessary. Haha, I'm not entirely sure ...

No, I don't even know what that is. Haha! Thanks again, Sam! I'm writing more and more chapters. Right now, just all of the important parts though. Hopefully very soon ...

As for the topic comment, I do know that. And I'm not writing this story to bring about awareness on child abuse. No, I'm writing this story to show that ...

Thank you! If you found this bit interesting, wait until I have the rest typed out. It'll get intense. And yes, Owen is made to be unusually childish. Because of ...