drpanama

It was very lovely, Hallmark card worthy. The last lines, "here is my heart it will break for you," i believe has the most power and effect on the poem.

I found this poem captivating, you should take more advantage of those captivating qualities and add more descriptive words that would add just that much more emotion into the work. ...

I walk through the door blood already rising my thoughts say go to her but my mind says quit lying quit cheating quit lusting o how conniving it is but ...