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Re: Someone I knew
Is this about Jesus Christ or some Mexican guy named Jesus \"hey zues\" . If it\'s about Jesus Christ I find it hard to believe that you \"knew\" him since ...
Thu Mar 31, 2011 10:56 pm -
Re: Guillotine Desires
~Chorus~ Somebody shut the brown hens up Somebody shut the brown hens up Why won't they shut the fuck up? Why don't they shut the fuck up? The white rooster ...
Thu Mar 31, 2011 1:46 am -
Re: Say Goodbye
At first I was not sure if this was about a father/daughter domestic situation or about abusing love situation...although the later seems to fit when reading further through the lyric. ...
Thu Mar 31, 2011 1:31 am -
Re: Someone To Fight For
I\'m a bit more cynical with this piece. Razcoon pointed out all of the flaws that were scattered within this piece. This just came off being too cliche\' and some ...
Thu Mar 31, 2011 1:19 am -
Re: The Apocalypse
I\'ll give you a 3 for effort. It wasn\'t really scary at all. Feel free to rate my lyrics as well if you don\'t mind using your same scale. Have ...
Wed Mar 30, 2011 4:07 pm -
Re: First Love
Forgive me if this comes off being mean, but when I read this I thought it was a girl who wrote this. It\'s too feminine in my opinion and like ...
Mon Mar 28, 2011 5:29 am -
Re: As I did, so did you
Solace is my goal But solitude has its hold Disease mind is mine But here I say that I’m fine If I could change who I was Then you would ...
Mon Mar 28, 2011 5:24 am -
Re: Just stay with me
This pretty much explains how I feel...I just copied it from someone else...feel free to point your gun at me: You\'ve created a really nice landscape for emotion-- the repetition ...
Mon Mar 28, 2011 5:21 am -
Re: RE: Born This Way (Lady Gaga)
Okay, I\'m not sure if you posted Lady Gaga\'s song here or not. Also, are you telling us that you\'re gay? Because what\'s the whole deal with the gay\'s shouldn\'t ...
Mon Mar 28, 2011 5:19 am -
Re: J. 1823
"...Thou canst not see my face: for there shall no man see me, and live." It must have been spectacular to have experienced it Flawlessness before the face of one ...
Mon Mar 28, 2011 5:12 am -
Re: What is Love?
It seems no one picked up on you saying \"Love is looking if your eyes. \" rather than saying \"Love is looking in your eyes\". You made this mistake twice. ...
Mon Mar 28, 2011 5:05 am -
Re: Hannah's Heartbreak
I agree with Aquamarine when he/she said this: \"The first thing I noticed here were the ellipses. I\'m assuming (apologies if the assumption is incorrect) that you\'re using them to ...
Mon Mar 28, 2011 4:47 am -
Re: Chains of Your Love
This isn\'t really that bad at all. I only see two mistakes in this piece. You spelled You\'d and I\'d with an e at the end. Other than that the ...
Mon Mar 28, 2011 4:44 am -
Re: The Perfect Getaway
The \"it\" is referring to the break up, thanks for the reply.
Sun Mar 27, 2011 4:01 am -
Re: The Perfect Getaway
It's been six months since it came The days are slower than they've ever been Do you know how sick I've been feelin' All my life's efforts in vain Oh ...
Fri Mar 25, 2011 3:43 pm
