dregymayfield

This was okay, it could have been better and I really doubt you wrote this for your school. Ever since the school shooting incidences many schools will not allow their ...

I liked this poem although some parts seemed a little forced. However, I'm sure that many of us have forced rhymed before. I noticed the mispelling of "held" as well. ...

I guess the other 21 people before me are lamewads who can't leave a post. God, that pisses me off when we submit our work and all these people read ...

I actually liked this a lot and can relate to it sometimes. Which I'm sure just about everyone can relate to being lazy now and then. Although I never see ...

This song was originally called "Fuck Ass Unicorn" but I thought that it wouldn't get posted if I left the original title. You can listen to this song on my ...

Verse one: What I've been meaning to say; For so long And yes; It matters What I've been putting off each day; Cos I'm less strong Than the all the ...

You have immense stalker qualities in yourself. This song was really awful (and I write a lot of awful songs myself). It just seemed to drag on and on. Why ...

I have no idea who David Archuleta is, but from what I have read from your song he sounds like one of those singers who sing about sissy things. You ...

She works hard for the money Always a line of men She works hard for the money A dick or hand is pushed in She works hard for the money ...

You kissed him and then asked if \"he loved you\". I\'m sorry that\'s just one in their right mind will kiss someone without knowing if they loved them or not ...

I have to agree with Crestfallen

hmm...sorry, but this really is quite bland (not that my stuff is any better), it\'s just too cliche and not original. Also you didn\'t need commas in the chorus when ...

i\'m not sure why this is rated 18. But a good song nontheless

I liked this a lot...I only saw two things that were a bit off. The first was when you said \"And maybe it’s these grey skies Or maybe it’s town ...

Do you remember The night you cried on my shoulder and I said everything will be okay But it's not okay No, no It's not okay No, no And as ...