dregymayfield

Boy, fucking ignore the ceiling fan and its ropey friend For all they want to do is hang around and use up your time If that razor wishes to dance ...

I agree with everyone on this. Some parts were good but I kept getting the idea that this was written by someone younger than 18 because it was just written ...

I agree to whomever mentioned about the song not making any sense. I had a real hard time understanding what the song is about. But some portions of it were ...

You did a wonderful job in describing things boys may say to get to third base..lol. Seriously, though, it was a bit cliche' but it wasn't all bad and yeah ...

I liked it!! I don't know what on earth that other person is talking about though. The formating is fine and if it's because it's in red doesn't really bother ...

I really liked the versus in this piece, however, I didn't really like the chorus and the bridge at the end. It threw me off into such a cliche' waterfall ...

Will I fail as a father? The question's such a bother But it makes its self at home- further feeling not my own Never got any closure The questions haunt ...

Why does it matter if you're gay when this song is talking about shooting a ferret?

The only thing that I thought was odd is that the title is called "If I left, Would you Right?". Now to me that doesn't make sense. Shouldn't it be ...

That was a bit exhausting and I really had to force myself to finish. There is a lot of unique wordplay here that unfortunately get's drowned out by the subject ...

I appreciate your comment, but as I said before this was something I started but never finished. So when it ends odd to you that's because I never finished of ...

King Iroham sits upon his throne, his throne which is placed in the town of Rukka. He rests and ponders and periodically he judges those who break his laws. The ...

Hmm, I feel that this song is really cliche' and I'm sorry if that sounds rude. It's just that this song has that same "I can't get over you" atmosphere ...

The song was okay But I'm confused because you said this is for your wife and that she was pregnant. Yet, your name is Ashely. Now did you choose that ...

Good effort, I'm not sure what else to say about it because I wasn't a 100 percent thrilled with it. I know it was supposed to be silly, but well ...