dreamseaker

i like your poem. it was very good. i think that how you made the lines ryme was very good. and that you do need to keep writing. i like ...

hey welcome to YWS if you gat any questions i will try and help you and if i cant i will try to find out. i hope you have fun ...

hey welcome to YWS i hope that everything works out great for you and good luck writing and all the other stuff that you do. :pirate3:

hey welcome to YWS i hope you have a lot of fun here and dont forget to write coolness. :mrgreen: have fun it is fun here!

And god knows we expect love. He knows, though before B-flat rolls of thunder,he squeezes a bit too tightly on her throat,leaves love cold and unmoving,unresponsive as your lips when ...

i thought the poem was very good. i enjoyed how it was a memory instead of the future. i feel that sometimes when people write a poem about the future ...

i really liked you artwork. it was very good. i am no artist thats for sure. i liked the coloring of everything like her hair. i thing that there needs ...

i think that you did a very impressive job writing this poem. i have nothing bad to say about it. all i can say is you better keep on writing.

i liked your poem. it kept me intertained. i thought towards the end that it got a little sad because he just turned and walked away? i think that is ...

i enjoyed your poem it was really good. i am in honers english 10 also know as pre AP english and i cannot write that good. i like how everything ...

i enjoyed your poem but i kinda got lost towards the end. it just keot repeating in a way that loses my interests. i think that if you take away ...

i like your story but it was hard to follow at times. some parts of it rhymed and others didnt and that made my reading it kinda get thrown off. ...

i like your letter. i really liked how you did the ending. it was simple yet still in a way comical

i know i havent really wrote very much so thanks for the comment.

as life shall turn all will burn at the sight of your great might no one will learn and their hearts will yearn for the light of your great might ...