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  • General Fiction Novels Re: Changes: Prologue

    It's a prologue because it just doesn't look right when it goes straight into chapter one - the story continually changes from the past to the present. Maybe I should ...

    Aug 29, 2005
  • Information Desk Archive Re: JustGoat.com

    Probably because it might attract more writers who are looking for an 18+ writing site, I have no idea if there's a lot around. But if there isn't and it's ...

    Aug 29, 2005
  • General Fiction Novels Re: Changes: Prologue

    Except they are complete in my mind, I have everything about them worked out down to the last detail - just because I might not have put it down doesn't ...

    Aug 29, 2005
  • General Fiction Novels Re: Changes: Prologue

    Thanks for the crit guys - I admit I have terrible grammar thats something I try to fix in the final version Anyway Snoink in chapter one you said this: ...

    Aug 29, 2005
  • Lounge, The Re: Critiques?

    I already am one so don't worry, I like it harsh ;) :roll:

    Aug 28, 2005
  • Lounge, The Re: Critiques?

    Could you look at my story Changes please? I have to have the final version done by Christmas and it needs so much work I don't know where to begin ...

    Aug 28, 2005
  • Randomosity Re: The Furbys Are BACK

    My furby is a pervert - no joke, me and a mate were going round another ones house and she hates them. So I dug out my furby and stuffed ...

    Aug 28, 2005
  • Lounge, The Re: Excited about going back to school

    I don't see my college friends but I do get to see my old school friends and get stuck in the middle of their pathetic wars. A years gone by ...

    Aug 27, 2005
  • Scripts Re: GCSE Script

    This is the script the group I was in for GCSE drama had to use for our practical exam. Re-reading it I can see why I got the grade I ...

    Aug 27, 2005
  • Lounge, The Re: Suggestive Adverts

    I was watching TV a few months ago and there was something said about how people were now using sex to sell their products. I didn't realise how true this ...

    Aug 25, 2005
  • Lounge, The Re: Excited about going back to school

    I can't wait to go back to college, although if my Business Studies/Tutor decides to slag off my hometown again I will not be guaranteeing his safety. I just found ...

    Aug 25, 2005
  • Lounge, The Re: Three FavouriteThings Today

    :arrow: Walking in the pouring rain - sounds insane but is so much fun when you're so short and accidentally walk into a puddle XD :arrow: TRAINS! :arrow: Getting the ...

    Aug 24, 2005
  • Randomosity Re: Great words

    Z'oh my gawd! (I know thats words but still :roll:) Zie Bop Crap Shoopuf (Random word from a game I'm addicted to saying :roll:) Exotic A few censored words I ...

    Aug 24, 2005
  • Lounge, The Re: Tattoos

    Oh and it must look great on men - btw it's not on my stomach so it won't stretch and it's easily hidden. Anyway who cares if it looks gross? ...

    Aug 21, 2005
  • Lounge, The Re: Tattoos

    Yea if you get one don't look at it and then think "Oh God this will be here when I'm wrinkly" then picture yourself as a 80yr old with tattoos...very ...

    Aug 21, 2005


Imagination is the one weapon in the war against reality.
— Jules de Gaultier