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Re: Story Idea. Does this sound halfway decent to you?
I quite like it so far! Of course, I would need to read the actually story first... But the plot sounds promising. DISCLAIMER: Do not expect pretty prose in this ...
Aug 26, 2008 -
Re: No Originality!
Disney is what I call a "cookie-cutter corporation." Once they find a general plot that works, they bend and twist it until it snaps. Everything, when you strip it down ...
Aug 26, 2008 -
Re: Alana: The life of a martial arts master, Chap. 1
I like it so far, the idea that there is a special force team of teenagers out there to settle the world's disputes... Interesting. It gets a little techinical in ...
Aug 26, 2008 -
Re: Lord of the Flies
I actually loved LOTF. Maybe that's just because I had a good teacher last year, but I still found the story excellent, very rich in symbolism. Some of the characters ...
Aug 26, 2008 -
Re: Worst Book You've Ever Read
Great Expectations. It was just a long description, then a few snipets of dialogue, then more description, then more dialogue, ect. I couldn't even recognize a climax in the story.
Aug 26, 2008 -
Re: Breaking Dawn
I was seriously disappointed in the Volturi. I was counting on Aro and Caius to be MUCH more badass. The tension was mounting through out the book, with Bella having ...
Aug 26, 2008 -
Re: Shakesphere!
Romeo and Juliet is a beautiful play, but can be interpretted in many different ways. Personally, it is one of my favorite works ever (I've read it about twenty times) ...
Aug 16, 2008 -
Re: Hey everyone!
The fourth Maximum Ride was so anticlimatic. And that weird box-guy kind of passed the realm of probablity and catapulted the book into fantasy. Breaking Dawn was very good, but ...
Aug 16, 2008 -
Re: Devil's Book- Chapter Oner
I'm glad I kept reading! I truly enjoy your descriptions and imagery. The flashback was a little confusing, as to where it started and where it ended, but other than ...
Aug 16, 2008 -
Re: Devil's Book- prologue
Very nice descriptions. The way you manipulated the third person point of view provided me with a clear sense of imagery. However, I felt that parts of it were slightly ...
Aug 16, 2008 -
Re: Vampire Novel
Well, I'll have to check out your story now, but the plot summary seems good. And just as Jay said, I congratulate you on getting this far. I also think ...
Aug 16, 2008 -
Re: Any of you have manga books?
I own: Millenium Snow volumes 1 +2 Wallflower volumes 1-13 Mugen Spiral volumes 1+2 Vampire Knight volumes 1+2 Skip Beat volumes 2-8 + 10 (I need to get the rest...) ...
Aug 16, 2008 -
Re: Hey everyone!
Hey! I just activated my account about 30 seconds ago. I also love Stephanie Meyer's books and the Maximum Ride series. Those books are so funny! I have to say ...
Aug 16, 2008 -
Re: Starting a new topic like this make me feel wasteful...
Hey, everyone. I'm dreaming_in_poetry. I love to read and write (obviously) and I also love singing and such. I'm an aspiring novelist. I actually have a manuscript completeled, but I'm ...
Aug 16, 2008
