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This is the REVISED copy of my first short story: "A Christmas story"! This story is somewhat historical, but it doesn't really have a set year/time. It's also based on ...

Hey! You have me a bit confused about the order of your posts. Is this the one I should read after the prologue or is it Chapter one? If it's ...

Brilliant! The cat with rabies really made me laugh, great idea :D The meeting with the boys is also very amusing, and your description of Danny is very good, I ...

Greetings Earthlings, I come in peace...I think :p I joined about 2-3 days ago but haven't got around to introduce myself properly yet. So here goes: I'm the infamous Dreaming, ...

Very funny piece. I like the language and the apparent overdramatization of the events. This girl really knows how to exaggerate small events, which makes the character funny and the ...

The 2nd person approach sent chills down my spine. I loved it, because it makes the reader involved from the first sentence. I have to admit that I got a ...

Thank you very much for the review and the link, I'll be sure to pay attention to those parts a bit more :D

This is my first short story in years, so please give me some pointers how to improve!! This story is somewhat historical, but it doesn't really have a set year/time. ...

Hi! A great post indeed, it's very hard to believe that you haven't written much fantasy before. I myself am a great fan of reading fantasy and I have pretty ...

Thank you Rosey :) Yes, I have read the rules and I'll be sure to follow them. I also checked out the mentors site, but I wouldn't mind more critics, ...

Yellow!!! I'd like a parter to write with! Would be fun :)

I think most of us have been there. I wrote a sad and depressing poem when a guy I liked chose another girl as well. Your poem is very good, ...

Wow! This is a very good beginning to a promising novel! Apart from a few typing mistakes it's very good. I like the plot, a teen who has superpowers starting ...

Greetings Earthlings, I come in peace..I think :p I'm the infamous Stasie, who comes from Russia, lives in Norway and studies in England. Yes I am one of those weird ...