-
Re: Untitled poem...
Thanks so much, everyone! I got a little lazy on the last part, so I think I'll probably rewrite the whole second half.
Aug 4, 2009 -
Re: Sterotypes and Labels
Labels may be funny or helpful to some people, but they have also ruined my life. I enjoy writing depressing poetry, like black, and was somewhat depressed a couple years ...
Aug 3, 2009 -
Re: The 'In Your Pants' Game
All That I've Got in your pants- The Used Animal I Have Become in your pants- Three Days Grace Behind Closed Doors in your pants- Rise Against Blood to Bleed ...
Aug 3, 2009 -
Re: The Inkheart Series
All in all, it was a great series. Very unique plot, and the characters are interesting. It moves along quickly without getting too confusing. My favorite character was actually Violante. ...
Aug 3, 2009 -
Re: The Hunger Games
I love this book. It's one of the best I have read in a long time. The plot is completely original, the characters are unique, and it's just an all-around ...
Aug 3, 2009 -
Re: Percy Jackson and The Olmpians by Rick Riodran
I think this series was a great series. It was well-written, humorous, dramatic, and with a hint of romance that didn't become the theme of the whole book (which is ...
Aug 3, 2009 -
Re: Untitled poem...
I know this isn't nearly as good as some that I have read on this website, but I've been told it's good, so here it is: Purples and blues of ...
Aug 3, 2009 -
Re: What's the worst thing you could do to a child?
Nice idea, but you really need to spice up the words that you use. You need more words appealing to the senses, and more exact words. Also, don't say 'It's ...
Aug 3, 2009 -
Re: Amber Riches
Wow. It was sort of an overused idea, but you made it unique with the style, words, and brilliant images. The only advice I have is not to use the ...
Aug 3, 2009 -
Re: The grief
Before I actually give you any other constructive criticism, you need to work on the spelling and grammar. It's confusing to read the way it's written now, and using correct ...
Aug 3, 2009 -
Re: I need help continuing stories...
I always have a problem with continuing stories. I always think of good, unique ideas, and the first few pages of my stories are always good, but I get a ...
Aug 3, 2009 -
Re: Welcome New Members! [2]
So... I was told to come here by a friend who read a poem I posted. As most people probably have been when joining this site, I am completely and ...
Aug 1, 2009
