dragonlover92

That was awesome! I was smiling and laughing through it all. I love how u give it from the dog's view and how u mintion the owner. Also I really ...

Its good. It gives me and image of a person in an empty room in the dark with no way out, searching for a way out. You did a very ...

I like it!

Good. Has a lot of feeling in it, makes me think about my relationship and what i'm blinded by. I like that in this you made me think, I like ...

Wow this was amazing! The hole time i was reading it i had one friend on my mind and u described the love u have for her and what I ...

Wow! That made me laugh!! Very interesting and clever! All i can say!

Ok thank you

Today I turn my back to you I'm putting my stuff on the bus For you are worse than the flu Because you broke up us Putting your arms around ...

I like it, first thought u were going to be cliche at the end but you were more showing how no one really knows anyone and people have a side ...

This was interesting. Started out funny and enturtanging than got a little serious, followed by meaning that made you think and you ended it funny to lighten the mood after ...

This is good but the one thing that i did get stuck on while reading was the 'And' on the 5th line. It might read more smoothly if you take ...

Wow... i don't know what to say its just amazing! It get so many feelings going. Love, sadness, a slight hate for the hunter as he say that she is ...

This is like a poem and a story of the life of the people who seem to be perfect. The people who smile the most and seem the happiness most ...

A Leaf's life and yours... Your life is like a leaf. It starts out so bright and green, hopeful. Then life gets harder and the weather gets cold, you change ...

This was awesome! First I thought that u wanted some guidance but than you seemed to guide yourself rate to were you were speaking the words that God put on ...