dragonlover92

I like this a lot! it explores all the bits it our generation and i really enjoyed reading!

My heart begs My mind screams For me to let go But that's what you get From a couple of teens You'd think that I would know Through all the ...

Wow, very good and i liked the rythems. But it seemed kind of lifeless like it didnt give a feel of what she was feeling. maybe use more descriptive verbs ...

So much going through my head. This was really good and it had sooo much feeling put into it. Made me feel angry in a way of how no one ...

This was really great! Made me think about this world we live in and what we do on a dayly basis. Made me think about all the judgement we do ...

This had alot of meaning in it, and it made me feel a rush from my past. It made me feel the longing that I think is what you were ...

As I sit here by my favorite window, Looking out at the world. The world that is now soaked, With the water of the sky. I jump at the sound ...

I really like this, but i'm kind of confused by the beginning. Were they things that she couldn't hear? Or stuff that was being said at the time? Maybe be ...

Wow, this was Amazing haha. But really this was very good at first i thought you were talking about a magician and her show, and then when you keep reading ...

This has a lot of feeling in it and a lot of it explained how someone feels when a loved one leave, which was very good. But i think you ...

I like this. Very well written and very good at the description, but one line i did get held up on when I was reading was, "it remembered a moment ...

This is really good. It has a lot of feelings to it, and it gives you a thought of how much these two people love and care for each other. ...

Thanks guys! ya I wasn't sure how to put it into lines but thank you for the help I really needed it!

The beginning of the end Such a cliché Yet it proves to be right At the end of each day As the sun leaves the sky The moon takes its ...

This was great! It reminds me of a writer one of my friends likes, she writes like this and its always amazing. Just like that writer this was amazing, you ...