dragonlover92

WOW! Best word for it, it has amazing feeling and depth to it. I can really feel the pain the person is going through. I really enjoyed that I got ...

This was amazing! It had so much feeling and I loved the vocabulary you used! I really liked the part "the sky flutters gray to the ground, and drags down ...

Wow, this is really good and made me feel a lot. You gave very good images and it had a lot of good words to elaborate how you were feeling. ...

I really like this! Made me laugh and smile a lot, but you lost me a little bit at "Till one day, away she ran, into trees’ care But she ...

I've lost you, You went away. All the time I think, Of how I went astray. I let you down, More than I can bear. It's time to end this, ...

I have waited for this day, I've waited forever it seems. I gulp down my fear, Get out of the car. Walking up to the house I feel ill, Clammy ...

Thanks guys! I really enjoyed reading these, and thank you for really reviewing and not just sugar coating it.

Thanks for the review ill work on it!

I need help believing That you are on my side. That you are not going to hurt me, Too many times I’ve cried. Believing that In your mind there are ...

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thanx a ton for the review!

You were amazing, And I fell for you. You became my best friend, But I didn't see what you could do. I wanted to let you in, And for me ...

Thanx! I edit it rate now and add in the commas.

Thanx! Ya i realized that i forgot commas rate after i posted it, but i couldn't find the edit button. lol Also do you have any suggestions on how to ...

Hello you, who make me smile To me you’re very dear. I’ll hold u close, without trial Wiping away every tear. From day to day, I’ll help u shine. Never ...