dragonight9

Hi Raven, So excited to read more of your amazing story. As I'm reading through: I like how you always (or almost always) start with a description of the environment. ...

Hi Raven! So excited to see what happens next. Here we go! As I'm reading through: I like how you introduced the characters for this chapter. Their arguing is a ...

Hi again Raven, So excited to see what happens next. Let's get right into it. As I'm reading through: Your description of the cavern really set the mood for the ...

Hi Raven! Been a while but I finally found time to read more of your amazing story. As I'm reading through: I love the idea that Kodin made a shack ...

Hi aaliyah, I like to review as I go then do an overview. I tend to be a bit nit picky when it comes to spelling mistakes so if you ...

Hi Raven, another short review. I love how Kita is completely unable to see the demons until they reveal themselves. It really adds to the feeling that this is their ...

Hi Raven, I read through this chapter and the next so fast I didn't have time to review! I was too excited to see how her meeting would go. So, ...

Hi Raven. I'm so excited to see what this chapter has in store. As I'm reading through: This is a very different start. I really got Sauron vibes from the ...

Hi Raven, finally got around to reading more of your story. As I'm reading through: I like how you described the leaves. Up until this point I imagined the forest ...

Hi Raven! Another exciting chapter awaits, so I'll dive right in. As I'm reading through: I don't think you need the comma between "three hours by now," in your first ...

Hi Raven! I'm excited to see what this chapter has in store, so let's right into the review! As I'm reading through: Right away I wanted to comment on the ...

Hi, can't wait to read more so let's get right into it. As I'm going through: I like the start a lot. It really shows the relationship between Kita and ...

Hi Raven! It's been a while but I'm back to review another chapter. As I'm reading through: I really liked your introduction to the study. I didn't know what sconces ...

Hi! This looked intriguing so I thought I'd leave a few comments on it. Please note that these are suggestions and I try to find ways you can improve so ...

Hi again, I've been so excited to read this chapter so let's get right into it. As I'm reading through: I really like how you initially described Kita's surroundings. All ...