dragonight9

Hi Raven, another short review. I love how Kita is completely unable to see the demons until they reveal themselves. It really adds to the feeling that this is their ...

Hi Raven, I read through this chapter and the next so fast I didn't have time to review! I was too excited to see how her meeting would go. So, ...

Hi Raven. I'm so excited to see what this chapter has in store. As I'm reading through: This is a very different start. I really got Sauron vibes from the ...

Hi Raven, finally got around to reading more of your story. As I'm reading through: I like how you described the leaves. Up until this point I imagined the forest ...

Hi Raven! Another exciting chapter awaits, so I'll dive right in. As I'm reading through: I don't think you need the comma between "three hours by now," in your first ...

Hi Raven! I'm excited to see what this chapter has in store, so let's right into the review! As I'm reading through: Right away I wanted to comment on the ...

Hi, can't wait to read more so let's get right into it. As I'm going through: I like the start a lot. It really shows the relationship between Kita and ...

Hi Raven! It's been a while but I'm back to review another chapter. As I'm reading through: I really liked your introduction to the study. I didn't know what sconces ...

Hi! This looked intriguing so I thought I'd leave a few comments on it. Please note that these are suggestions and I try to find ways you can improve so ...

Hi again, I've been so excited to read this chapter so let's get right into it. As I'm reading through: I really like how you initially described Kita's surroundings. All ...

Hi again! Dragonight here to review another amazing chapter :) As I'm reading through: That was so interesting that the medicine actually worked (at least for a while) and then ...

Hi Raven, hope you're having a great day. Here's my review. As I'm reading through: I think your first sentence could have been worded a bit better though it still ...

Hi Raven, hope you're having a great day. Here's my review. As I'm reading through: Man I couldn't stop myself. I usually am able to find points to comment on ...

Hi Raven, can't wait to read more of your story. I forgot to mention this last time but I really like the cover art. Did you make it yourself or ...

Hi again, I'm really intrigued by this new character and the darkness within. As I'm reading through: I liked your description of Kita at the start, it set the mood ...