dragonfphoenix

Thanks for the review! Glad you liked it. All food for thought free of charge. :P

Did you read all 19 since you followed me? O.O Wow, congrats! Glad you liked them. Onya is a hodgepodge of a lot of things, factory aside. And what's to ...

Does it have "[" brackets? A bit of BBCode for you: To get italics, put text between [i]insert text here[/i]. For underline and bold, substitute a u and a b ...

Thanks for the review! Yes, according to "true" grammar the periods are wrong, but there's two reasons. One I kinda dropped (I wrote the 'why' in and another story reason ...

Thanks for the review! Haha, yeah, I'm still trying to learn dialogue balance with this piece (especially since dialogue is sorta the foundation for the PoV I picked). And the ...

Thanks for the review!

Thanks for the review!

Thanks! Glad you liked it.

With "their," the real reason why I'd use it over "he" is too long for this chapter, and not the point. Read to see what I mean. But thanks for ...

I don't feel like it's too short or lacking anywhere, so it's probably fine. :)

So this is what happens in chat when the clock strikes 2300. *secretly wants to join in next time* :P

Thanks for the review! I'm very glad to have been an encouragement. (PS: fiction's actually my preferred genre, such as this. ) But yes, I am looking to get back ...

Thanks for the review! I'll go back over this (at some point; there are so many things I want to do, and not enough time) and see what I can ...

Haha, thanks for the review! Actually, I checked the "its" you referenced, and those were both intentional and correct. It's means "it is," whereas its is the possessive form. I ...

Thanks for the review, Subtle! And actually, linguistically Shakespeare came about a hundred years after the start of "Modern English" in the linguistic sense. According to our lovely friend Wikipedia