dragnet

Anna and Hannah's names are too much alike. I keep getting confused. Change Hannah's name to something more unique. If Hannah' skin is so dark, then she would have spent ...

Hey, I really liked it, but I think that I should be rated pg 13. I didn't think it was gore enough or swerish enough to be r. The part ...

WOW! I so didn't expect that! I have a friend named ben, and he's a big goof ball. So i imagined ben like that. WOW! Total surprise when I found ...

Hey. I thought that your story was cool, but I got too much of an impression that I was watching an anime TV show. I even started imagining the whole ...

Okay, I kinda liked it, but I think that it was moving too fast and that you need people to talk. Also, can you describe the g randfather more? And ...

Hey, I really want to read the rest! PLEASE post. And don't be afraid to post. Comments are ment to better the writer. And when there is comments, there are ...

That was really cool! I really liked it! I kind of got scared and felt sad for her. But, now that she kind of hates tha book, is she ever ...

Hey, I really liked it! But, it needs a couple commas here or there. THere are one or two things that confuse me: If Theol says that it will be ...

I'm really glad that you were able to finally get it down onto paper. That happens a lot; the story that I'm currently writing, I knew what was going to ...