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Re: New
*smiles* Hey, how goes it? Glad your here, this is like one big happy family. You need a friend, I'm your friend. But the best way to make friends is ...
Jan 24, 2009 -
Re: To the death: Chapter 1-Part 1
Sorry, but it's quite confusing. It's hard to keep track over who was talking and if Alison really was being insulting. If she was, why would everyone say she wasn't? ...
Jan 24, 2009 -
Re: My Vampire Story, Chapter One
Hey, Emo! Nice work, but I do have some comments. First, why are they in a cave and how did they get there? Why didn't Mir come with them if ...
Jan 24, 2009 -
Re: I'm New
Easy peasy. Do your best, have fun and make friends. Plus, no chat speak and for everything you post you must have review two peices. Have fun! Wonderful ways to ...
Jan 24, 2009 -
Re: Until death do us part
Cool. I really liked it. I just wrote a short story like this one. keep it up.
Jan 21, 2009 -
Re: My Pain
THIS IS NOT MY WORK! MY FRIEND WROTE THIS, AND I AM PUTTING IT UP SO SHE CAN TELL WHETHER OR NOT TO THROW IT AWAY! I THINK IT IS ...
Jan 21, 2009 -
Re: Glass eyes and Ghosts
Anna and Hannah's names are too much alike. I keep getting confused. Change Hannah's name to something more unique. If Hannah' skin is so dark, then she would have spent ...
Jan 21, 2009 -
Re: The Elemental Gem
I thought it was really cool, and I want to hear more!
Jan 6, 2009 -
Re: The Masked Ball
She swept into the room, the image of beauty. Her long, flowing white dress, dark hair and violet eyes hidden by a silver mask drew all the single men, while ...
Jan 6, 2009 -
Re: Wolf Moon- Prolouge
Hey, I really liked it, but I think that I should be rated pg 13. I didn't think it was gore enough or swerish enough to be r. The part ...
Jan 6, 2009 -
Re: Deepest's Tale Part i
this story belongs in the fanfiction section of this site. put it there.
Jan 5, 2009 -
Re: Tell Us The Last Thing You Said Out Loud
"Mom? What did I just wait, I have to write what I'm saying right now down. Mom..what...did...i...just...say...right...now...no...wait...i...have...to...write...what...I'm... saying...right...now...do
Jan 5, 2009 -
Re: Imagine how the person above you looks like by their avatar
A person who likes bright colored clothes and acting really girly. Squeals and stuff.
Jan 5, 2009 -
Re: What Real Vampires Would Do
WOW! I so didn't expect that! I have a friend named ben, and he's a big goof ball. So i imagined ben like that. WOW! Total surprise when I found ...
Jan 1, 2009 -
Re: The Quest
Hey. I thought that your story was cool, but I got too much of an impression that I was watching an anime TV show. I even started imagining the whole ...
Jan 1, 2009