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I've been working on this for quite a while. It doesn't get magical until chapter four, but at the begining of it, I'll put a little thing telling what's happened ...

Um...okay... *slowly edges away* I think this was kind of interesting, but it needs more...flaire.

Hey, Laura! I really liked it, but the part about bringing old people back confused me. *shrugs* It was still mighty good though!

Hey, pretty good, but a bunch of mistakes for grammer and stuff...keep at it...sorry... so...tired...

I wouldn't do it. *shrugs* Just the way I am. What would you do if you fell in love with a person you only talked to through AIM?

England

Banned for lieing about having the best avatar ever. Also, banned for not having a real avatar :evil:

I know you all think that this story is not fantasy fiction, but give it a chance. It will become. It's just not there yet. October 23rd The first thing ...

I like it, though there we a LOT of grammer errors, like you misspelled sweet and there weren't enough commas.

Well, first thing that you need is an agent. Someonewho will get you the best deal, the best way to get as many books out there from the best publisher. ...

August 30th Today in English, Mrs. Palavero announced that we shall have pen pals. And not just pen pals, but PEN PALS FROM ENGLAND! She says that she has a ...

If this is what you really believe, then you din't belong here! No! Talk to the hand!

August 28th Today is the first day of HIGH SCHOOL! Yay! I am so excited that I couldn’t sleep very long. It’s 4:30 now, so I need to get up ...

I like it! Keep at it!

Oh, okay. *sheepish grin* I was kind of worried at first. I was jetting between all the prolouges and other chapters because I thought I missed something. Then it said ...