dragnet

First thing, I love the idea of the kill out of the view of a serial killers eyes. But I have some questions. How did she get into serial killing? ...

Firstly, you need to capital names. Walker and Bell's names were not capitalized at the beginning and it confused me for a minute. Secondly, in serious writing, we do not ...

Hey, this is good, just a comment. Vara is angry that she's being ignored and steam flies out of her ears. That sounded weird, seeing as steam doesn't exactly fly ...

[color=#FF00FF]Please do not "read and run". I really really need reviews, even if it's just something like "That's good" or "this story sucks". Anything is better than nothing. And this ...

Will anyone comment on this?!?!

I think that it was very good and extreamly well-written. It was very good and you should totally continue it. I'm thinking that it should be chapter one. Prolouges are ...

I liked this very much. It is very good, with just enough mystery and what is going on to keep people reading but not enough to make them say I ...

This is very good and I do like it a lot. I have no problems with it and please PM me when Chapter One is up. Thank you and have ...

You need more details. That is my only review. Half the time I was like, I have no idea what is going on. So, add a lot more detail into ...

Wow, this was very good, even though it was not particularly long. The only thing that I need to say is that, and the end of the first sentence, you ...

I softly kissed him. His lips pressed back against mine and I could just feel the love radiating off of him and into me. His love pulsed down, deep into ...

I do like this quite a lot. It's very good and there is little that is bothering me. However, there is one single thing. On the letter from Alexa's grandfather, ...

Eh, it was ok. It was interesting, but not that interesting. Basically, you said one thing over and over: we are ment for something more.

No matter what, always choose life, because death is never a last resort.

There is only one person to save me And that person is myself But what if I don't want to be saved? Think about that, hon. ;)