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Re: Prolouge
Hey people I have a story im writing that involves my own original characters becoming involved with gods and beings from mythology. I wrote a prologue for the story that ...
Apr 12, 2017 -
Re: if you want your writing to be completely torn apart cmere
Hey Jyva I have a story named that i would like to be thoroughly eviscerated. I am definitely not a great writer and i dont have a definitive writing style ...
Dec 6, 2016 -
Re: Falcon's Feathered Feedback
Hi I have a story named that i would like for you to review/critique. It includes the prologue and the first chapter. Thanks in advance
Dec 6, 2016 -
Re: I neeeeeeeed to reveiw
Hey Chie i have a story named and i would appreciate if you could review and critique it for me. Thanks
Nov 30, 2016 -
Re: General Request Repository
Hey guys i would really appreciate anyone that can review and critique my novel named Thanks in advance
Nov 28, 2016 -
Re: Walker's reviews
Hey Walker I have a story called Return to Nothing. Its a Fantasy story that deals with my own original characters and characters from mythology. I would really appreciate if ...
Nov 27, 2016 -
Re: The 'grim is coming for you.
Hey Megrim, nice to meet you. I have a story i am writing called Return to Nothing. its genre fantasy and the story focuses on my original characters placed alongside ...
Nov 27, 2016 -
Re: Avoiding writing a bad villain
Hey Jhinx thanks for the info it really helps out with making my antagonist more defined. As far as morality goes I plan on using one of the most important ...
Jul 24, 2016 -
Re: Avoiding writing a bad villain
I would appreciate any feedback or tips on how to improve him.
Jul 22, 2016 -
Re: Avoiding writing a bad villain
I have a main antagonist im writing named Chaos(planning on changing it once i think of a better name). He is the demongod(Half god half devil) of pandemonium. Through most ...
Jul 22, 2016 -
Re: Imagery and writing good
Hey I'm writing a story and wanted to get some input on a way to improve my writing as its pretty subpar. This is part of a fight between gods ...
Apr 30, 2016 -
Re: Poetry and Beginnings of Novels
Hey Sarah I would appreciate if you could review the Prologue and first chapter of my novel and provide me with some tips on improving my
Mar 9, 2016 -
Re: Will Review and Proofread
Hey Kat how are you I have a novel i am working on called the Seven Heavenly Kings and appreciate if you could look it over and review it and ...
Mar 6, 2016 -
Re: General Request Repository
Hey everyone I have a novel called and i would really appreciate any and all reviews.
Feb 28, 2016 -
Re: Keepwriting's reviews
Hey Keepwriting I'd be really happy if you could review the first chapter of my novel for me here's the link:
Feb 28, 2016